JAMES SHIRLEY'S TRIUMPH OF PEACE:
ANALYZING GREG'S NIGHTMARE
by
STEPHEN TABOR
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B outer forme Phase IIIb
Preparation for printing: all pages get new skeletons; B1r
gets 28 pairs of acorns,
all properly oriented. Typo on B1r gets corrected. The
tavern direction on B3r is
rewritten from three lines to one again and positioned
flush right.
Pauses for correction: one: on B4V the word "stndy" in l.13 is
corrected, after
a fashion, by turning the "n" upside-down. Perhaps as an accident
during this
operation, the comma after "Laughter' on B2V,
l.23, goes missing.
After printing: all pages kept standing; B2v keeps its
skeleton, the others are
stripped. B1r loses its acorns along with the page
number.
Phases IIIa and IIIb of B(o) are now perfected together:
JAMES SHIRLEY'S TRIUMPH OF PEACE:
ANALYZING GREG'S NIGHTMARE
by
STEPHEN TABOR
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