The following symbols are used: B (Bruccoli—that is, an
emendation to be made for the first time), C (Cowley—"The
Author's
Final Version," 1951), F (Fitzgerald—a revision marked by the
author
in his copy of the novel), S (Serial—Scribner's
Magazine,
1934), I (first edition, 1934), II (The Scribner Library edition,
1960).
| 3.1 |
the shore ] F; the pleasant shore
S, I-II |
| 3.2 |
stood ] F; stands S, I-II |
| 3.4 |
cooled ] F; cool S, I-II |
| 3.4 |
stretched ] F; stretches S, I-II |
| 3.5 |
Now ] F; Lately S, I-II |
| 3.6 |
in 1925 ] F; a decade ago S, I-II |
| 3.7-8 |
April; in those days only ] F;
April. Now, many bungalows
cluster near it, but when this
story begins only S, I-II; April.
Only C |
| 3.17 |
had come ] F; came S, I-II |
| 3.21 |
had floundered ] C; floundered
S, I-II |
| 4.8 |
this ] F; one S, I-II |
| 4.10;19.6 |
hotel ] C; Hotel S, I-II |
| 18.25;220.2 |
hotel ] S; Hotel I-II |
| 12.6 |
Antheil ] C; Anthiel S, I-II |
| 12.8;13.5 |
Ulysses ] S; Ulysses I-II |
| 16.11;30.11 |
Daddy's Girl. ] C;
'Daddy's Girl.' S, I-II |
| 17.11 |
the ] C; The S, I-II |
| 18.11 |
"Nice Carnival Song" ] B; ˄ ˜ ˄
S, I-II, C |
| 18.12 |
Le Temps ] S; Le Temps I-II |
| 18.13 |
The Saturday Evening Post ] S;
The Saturday Evening Post I-II;
the Saturday Evening Post C |
| 18.30 |
czar ] C; Czar S, I-II |
| 19.1 |
Buddhas' ] C; Buddha's S, I-II |
| 19.5 |
Eleven years ago ] B; Ten years
ago S, I-II; Eleven years before
C |
| 20.19 |
was ] C; were S, I-II |
| 21.26 |
swimming. ] C; ˜ , S, I-II |
| 22.18 |
the Paris Herald ] B; The New
York Herald I; The New York
Herald S, II; the Paris edition
of the New York Herald C |
| *24.19-23 |
His eyes . . . . more ] stet S,
I-II, C |
| 24.23 |
uninterested ] C; disinterested
S, I-II |
| *24.30 |
Señor ] C; Signor S, I-II |
| 28.1 |
as nearly sulky ] S; nearly as
sulkily I-II; feeling nearly as
sulky C |
| 42.8 |
Divers' ] S; Diver's I-II |
| 42.25 |
irrelevant ] C; irrelative S, I-II |
| 48.20 |
Iles de Lérins ] C; Isles des
Lerins S, I-II |
| 60.4 |
party ] C; parties S, I-II |
| *61.10 |
words ] stet S, I-II |
| 68.16 |
chair. . . . ] B; ˜. . . S, I-II, C |
| 70.6 |
Daddy's Girl ] C; "Daddy's Girl"
S, I-II |
| 71.12 |
because ] C; due to the fact that
S, I-II |
| 74.5 |
Beaumont-Hamel ] C; ˜ ˄ ˜ S,
I-II |
| 75.15 |
mairie ] S; mairie I-II, C |
| 75.21 |
Undine ] S; Undine I-II |
| 75.22 |
marraines ] S; marraines I-II,
C |
| 75.23 |
Württemberg ] C; Wurtemburg
S, I-II |
| 76.26 |
seven ] C; six S, I-II |
| 78.6 |
Württembergers ] C; Wurtemburgers
S, I-II |
| 78.8 |
Old ] C; old S, I-II |
| 79.2 |
Arts ] C; Art S, I-II |
| 79.4 |
Hôtel ] C; Hotel S, I-II |
| 97.5 |
hotel ] C; Hotel S; Hôtel I-II |
| 101.9 |
odyssey ] C; Odyssey S, I-II |
| 102.5 |
Hengist ] C; Hengest S, I-II |
| 104.28; |
136.15 Champs-Élysées ] C; ˜
˄ ˜ S, I-II |
| 105.1 |
Saint-Lazare ] C; ˜ ˄ ˜ I-II; St.
Lazare S |
| 106.9 |
on a world ] C; on world S, I-II |
| 111.19 |
Diaghilev ] C; Diaghileff S, I-II |
| 111.21 |
décor ] C; decor S, I-II |
| 117.5 |
friend ] S; friends I-II |
| *119.10,12 |
100,000 Chemises ] C; 1000
chemises S, I-II |
| *119.30 |
Canossa ] B; Ferrara S, I-II, C |
| *120.1-122.6 |
hour it had become ] F;
hour of standing. . . . It had
become S, I-II |
| 120.14 |
de Saint-Ange ] B; des Saintes ˄
Anges S; des Saintes-Anges I-II |
| 121.11 |
through? ] S; ˜. I-II, C |
| 122.31 |
Brizard ] C; Brizzard S, I-II |
| 122.31 |
Fernet-Branca ] B; André Fernet
˄ Blanco S, I-II; Fernet ˄ Branca
C |
| 122.32 |
Rocher ] C; Rochet S, I-II |
| 125.4 |
had been awakened ] C; had
awakened S, I |
| *128.17 |
Montmartre ] stet S, I-II, C |
| *128.18 |
Copenhagen ] stet S, I-II, C |
| 128.22 |
Why you ] stet S, I-II |
| 128.23 |
Évreux ] C; Evreux S, I-II |
| 129.26 |
conservatism ] S; conversation I-II, C |
| 131.4 |
Mosby ] C; Moseby S, I-II |
| 132.10 |
concessionnaire ] C; concessionaire I-II |
| 132.23 |
Liberty ] C; Liberty S, I-II |
| 133.4,8 |
France ] C; France S, I-II |
| 133.15 |
about ] C; of S, I-II |
| 136.2 |
arrondissement ] C; arrondisement
S, I-II |
| 136.16 |
failing ] stet S, I-II, C |
| 137.21 |
godlike ] C; Godlike S, I-II |
| 139.9 |
states ] C; States S, I-II |
| 139.29 |
Latin Quarter ] C; French Latin
quarter S, I-II |
| 142.13 |
Third ] C; third S, I-II |
| 145.32 |
unexceptionably ] B; unexceptionally
S, I-II, C |
| 152.18 |
Damenstiftgasse ] C; Damenstiff
Strasse S, I-II |
| 153.18 |
at] F; in S, I-II |
| 153.27 |
criterion ] C; criteria S, I-II |
| 153.31 |
The Rose and the Ring ] S; The
Rose and the Ring I-II |
| 154.17 |
yourself. Once ] F; yourself—once
S, I-II |
| 154.24 |
subject. No good sense." ] F;
subject." S, I-II |
| 154.28 |
people—they were the illusions ]
F; people; illusions S, I-II |
| 155.7-9 |
destiny. Best ] F; destiny. . .
Best S, I-II |
| 156.16 |
cortex ] C; cervical S, I-II |
| 157.2; |
158.33 Zürichsee ] B; Zurichsee
S, I-II |
| 157.7 |
Kraepelin ] F; Krapaelin S, I-II |
| *157.13-15 |
You . . . Dick." ] stet I-II |
| *157.16 |
war—you ] stet S,
I-II |
| 158.5 |
privates ] F; private soldiers S,
I-II |
| 158.10 |
"Toward ] F; "—toward S, I-II |
| 159.6 |
plateau ] F; eminence S, I-II |
| 159.12 |
Outside, some ] F; Some S, I-II |
| 159.13 |
one ] F; they S, I-II |
| 159.20 |
room. Pushing ] F; room; pushing S, I-II |
| 159.24 |
first ] F; first one S, I-II |
| 160.1 |
about the ] F; about the time of
the S, I-II |
| *162.21 |
farcical ] B; farcicle S, I-II, C |
| 164.3, 4, 5, 8, 13 |
. . . . ] C; . . . S, I-II |
| *167.7 |
thirteen ] B; eleven S, I-II;
twelve C |
| 175.9; |
311.26 clinic ] C; Clinic S, I-II |
| 175.9 |
Interlaken ] C; Interlachen S;
Interlacken I-II |
| 177.4 |
gladiolus ] C; gladiola S, I-II |
| 178.10 |
Suppé's ] C; Suppe's S, I-II |
| 178.19-20 |
path, where, in a moment,
|
|
a shadow cut across it—she ] C;
path; where, in a moment, a shadow cut
across it—she F; path —where in a moment
a shadow
cut across it. She S, I-II |
| 180.10 |
"A ] C; ˄ ˜ S, I-II |
| 180.12 |
down. . . . ] B; down . . . S,
I-II; down—" C |
| 180.22 |
shoulder—then apart. ] F;
shoulder. S, I-II |
| 180.23 |
record.—Have ] C; record," she
said. "—Have S, I-II; record,—
Have F |
| 181.4 |
table, male eyes ] F; table, eyes
S, I-II |
| 181.26 |
service ] B; Service S, I-II; army
C |
| 183.11 |
Glas Bier ] C; Glas-bier S; Glas-Bier I-II |
| 187.17 |
Burberry ] B; burberry S, I-II, C |
| 192.12 |
who ] S; whom I-II |
| 193.9, 31 |
Kraepelin ] C; Krapaelin S, I-II |
| 193.15 |
Extra space after l.15] F; no
extra space S, I-II |
| *193.17 |
Dent du Midi ] C; Jugenhorn S, I-II |
| 193.22 |
trainbands ] C; trained bands S;
trained-bands I-II |
| 193.31 |
sie ] C; siz I-II |
| 194.7 |
down into port ] C; down port S, I-II |
| 195.3 |
Kursaal ] C; Kursal I-II |
| *197.19 |
four ] C; five S, I-II |
| 199.23 |
Vanity Fair. ] C; 'Vanity Fair.' S,
I-II |
| 199.24 |
schizoid ] S; schizzoid I |
| 200.1 |
Guards ] C; guards' S, I-II |
| 205.12 |
Rocher ] C; Rochers S, I-II |
| 209.23 |
camérière ] B;
camerière I-II;
cameriere C |
| 209.30 |
Grotto ] C; Grotte S, I-II |
| 211.28 |
Affaires Étrangères ] C; Affaires
Etrangères S, I-II |
| *212.9 |
Tommy ] stet S, I-II |
| *212.23-4 |
beach with my husband and
two children. ] stet S, I-II |
| 215.10 |
"Nice Carnival Song" ] C; ˄ ˜ ˄ S,
I-II |
| 217.23 |
McBeth ] C; MacBeth S, I-II |
| 219.30 |
into ] C; in S, I-II |
| 221.11 |
menagerie ] C; Menagerie S, I-II |
| 223.28 |
hotel ] C; Hôtel I; Hotel S, II |
| 223.29; |
353.11 casino ] C; Casino S, I-II |
| *226.5 |
just over ] C; almost S, I-II |
| 226.8 |
spinster's ] C; spinsters' S, I-II |
| *227.23 |
Gregorovious ] B; Gregorovius
S, I-II, C |
| *230.11 |
have ] C; haven't S, I-II |
| 230.20 |
Privatdocent ] B; Privat docent
S, I; Privat-dozent II, C |
| 233.3 |
Humpty Dumpty ] C; Humpty-Dumpty S,
I-II |
| 236.5 |
Prokofiev's Love for Three
Oranges. ] C; Prokofieff's Love
of Three Oranges. S; Prokofieff's
"Love of Three Oranges." I-II |
| 236.8 |
his bed-lamp and ] C; the light
and S; his bed-lamp light and
I-II |
| *238.1 |
seven ] C; eight S, I-II |
| *238.15 |
ergo ] stet S, I-II |
| *239.30 |
uninstructed ] B; instructed S, I-II, C |
| 240.25 |
as if imprisoned in ] C; as imprisoned
in S, I; as imprisoned as in II |
| 243.14 |
with nail scissors ] C; with scissors
S; with a nail scissors I-II |
| *246.22 |
nine ] C; six S, I-II |
| 249.20 |
opposite ] C; apposite S, I-II |
| 250.21 |
schizophrenic ] C; "schizophrêne" S,
I-II |
| 252.10 |
Émile's ] C; Emile's S, I-II |
| 252.10 |
Émile ] C; Emile S, I-II |
| 254.7 |
patients' ] S; patient's I-II |
| 255.10 |
The Century ] B; The Century
I-II, the Century C |
| 255.10 |
the Motion Picture ] C; The
Motion Picture I-II |
| 255.10 |
L'Illustration ] S; L'Illustration
I-II |
| 255.11 |
and the Fliegende Blätter ] S;
and the Fliegende Blätter I-II; and Fliegende
Blätter C |
| 256.13 |
a ] C; A S, I-II |
| 257.7 |
or ] C; nor S, I-II |
| 257.7 |
men's ] C; their S, I-II |
| 257.32 |
inordinately, meanwhile ] B; inordinately
and S; inordinately ˄
meanwhile I-II; inordinately C |
| 258.2 |
grand tour ] B; Grand Tour S,
C; grand Tour I-II |
| *259.11 |
stood ready to depart] S; departed
I-II; lingered C |
| 259.31 |
the Herald ] C; The
Herald
S; The Herald I-II |
| 262.7 |
Erbsensuppe ] B; erbsen-suppe
S, I-II; Erbsen-suppe C |
| 262.7 |
Würstchen ] C; würstchen S, I-II |
| 262.8 |
steins ] B; helles S, I-II; seidels C |
| 262.9 |
Kaiserschmarren. ] B;
kaiserschmarren. S;
"kaiser-schmarren." I-II
Kaiser-schmarren. C |
| 266.16 |
the income ] C; it S, I-II |
| 268.17 |
the steamer's ] C; its S, I-II |
| 270.11 |
hoofs ] C; hoops I-II |
| 270.17 |
The Grandeur that was Rome ]
C; 'The Grandeur that was
Rome' S, I-II |
| 271.1 |
Corriere della Sera ] C; Corriere
della Sera I-II |
| 271.1 |
Sainclair ] stet S, I-II, C |
| 271.1 |
Wall Street ] C; 'Wall Street'
I-II |
| 271.3 |
città ] C; citta I-II |
| *271.14 |
three ] B; four S, I-II, C |
| *271.16 |
twenty-one . . . thirty-seven ] B;
twenty-two . . . thirty-eight S,
I-II, C |
| 274.2 |
Daddy's Girl ] C; Daddy's Girl
I-II |
| 274.17 |
now. . . . ] C; now . . . S, I-II |
| 274.21 |
heaven. . . . ] B; heaven . . . I-II;
heaven. C |
| 276.12 |
twenty-one ] B; twenty-two S,
I-II, C |
| 288.16 |
Nazionale ] C; Nationale S, I-II |
| 290.5 |
mousseux ] S; mousseaux I-II |
| *291.12 |
Birmingham ] stet S, I-II |
| 294.16,23 |
saoul ] C; sault S; saoûl I-II |
| 296.7 |
Guards ] B; guards' S, I-II, C |
| 301.10 |
on which ] C; whereon S, I-II |
| *301.18 |
sempre diretto ] C; semper
dritte S, I-II |
| 301.18 |
sinistra ] C; sinestra S,
I-II |
| 301.18 |
destra ] C; dextra S,
I-II |
| 301.22 |
Piazza di Spagna ] C; Piazzo d'
Espagna S, I-II |
| 306.18 |
palpable ] stet S, I-II |
| 309.28 |
telegram ] C; cable S, I-II |
| 313.6 |
with ] C; to S, I-II |
| 314.3 |
Wassermanns ] B; Wassermans
S, I-II, C |
| 314.15 |
Chilean ] C; Chilian S, I-II |
| 316.7, |
25; 319.22 Chile ] C; Chili S,
I-II |
| *317.3 |
the late thirties ] B; the forties
S, I-II; one's late thirties C |
| *320.17 |
Devereux ] I1951; Charles S,
I1934
|
| 320.20 |
in which ] B; wherein S, I-II; where C |
| 320.27 |
grata ] S; gratis
I-II |
| 323.6 |
the Paris Herald ] B; The New
York Herald S, I-II; the New
York Herald C |
| 325.5 |
"The Wedding of the Painted
Doll." ] S; The Wedding of the
Painted Doll. I-II |
| 327.18 |
cess ] C; 'cess S, I-II |
| *331.2-3 |
been rented again, so ] B; long
been rented for the summer, so
S; been rented again for the
summer, so I-II, C |
| 331.6 |
are ] C; is S, I-II |
| *331.11 |
eight and six ] B; eleven and
nine S, I-II; seven and nine C |
| 332.4 |
regimen ] C; regimentation S, I-II |
| *332.13 |
six ] B; nine S, I-II; seven C |
| 332.24 |
Owing ] C; Due S, I-II |
| *332.29-341.11 |
stet S, I-II, C |
| 334.1 |
Kabyle . . . Sabæan ] C; Kyble
. . . Sabian S; Kyble . . . Sabaean
I-II |
| 336.27 |
itself ] S; herself I-II |
| *337.11 |
La ] B; El S, I-II, C |
| 342.13 |
Mouton ] C; Moutonne S, I-II |
| 344.7 |
Salaud ] I1951; Salaut S; Saland
I1934
|
| 345.8 |
him, about . . . guess in ] C;
him, about . . . guess at in I-II;
him . . . guess at in S |
| 345.23 |
bay ] C; Bay S, I-II |
| 345.23; |
346.6; 349.16; 353.30 Margin ]
S; Margin I-II |
| 347.23 |
nous autres héros," he said, "il
faut ] B; nous héros," he said,
"il nous faut S, I-II; nous autres
héros il faut C |
| 347.24 |
héroïsme ] S; héroisme I-II,
C |
| *348.6 |
Légion Étrangère ] B; Corps
d'Afrique du Nord S, I-II; Bataillon
d'Afrique C |
| 349.23 |
Lady Caroline ] C; Lady Sibly-Biers S,
I-II |
| 350.24 |
enfantillage ] C; enfance S; enfanterie I-II |
| 351.14 |
saying, "What ] B; saying:
¶"What S, I-II; saying ˄ "What C |
| 353.11 |
casino ] B; Casino S, I-II, C |
| *352.3 |
lesion ] stet S, I-II |
| 353.16 |
them ] C; it S, I-II |
| 354.2 |
waiting ] B; attendant S, I-II;
Divers' C |
| 354.13 |
à ] C; a S, I-II |
| 357.17 |
Niçois ] C; Niçoise S, I-II |
| 361.20 |
expressed ] C; personified S, I-II |
| 363.30 |
hook ] S; nook I |
| *364.5 |
four ] B; five S, I-II, C |
| *364.8 |
summers ] B; years S, I-II, C |
| *364.14 |
four ] B; five S, I-II, C |
| 367.1 |
Baby Gar ] stet S, I-II |
| 368.33 |
Abrams's ] S; Abram's I-II |
| 369.31 |
Loos ] S; Loos' I-II |
| 369.31 |
Faits Accomplis ] S; Faits Accomplis
I-II, C |
| 380.18 |
from what ] C; than I-II |
| 382.6 |
Kornilov ] C; Korniloff S, I-II |
| 384.15 |
to find ] C; finding S, I-II |
| *391.28 |
Sibly ] S; Sibley I-II, C |
| 399.16 |
the Herald . . . the
Times ]
C;
The Herald . . . The Times S;
The Herald . . . The Times I-II |
| 399.20 |
ouste ] C; Ouste S, I-II |
| *399.24-5 purse. It ] C; purse—and Dick
recognized it as he saw it. It S,
I-II |
| *399.29-33 |
en," Dick called after him,
"When . . . here?" ] C; en," Dick
identified him as the man who
had once hailed him in the . . .
five years before. ¶"When . . .
here?" he called after him. S, I-II |
| 399.31 |
Rue de Saint-Ange ] B; Rue de
St. Anges; Due de Saints Anges
I; Rue de Saints Anges II |
| 400.31 |
victims ] C; dupes S, I-II |
| 401.11 |
principle ] S; principal I-II |
| *401.21 |
"I . . . Dick. ] stet I-II |
| 403.5 |
beach ] C; Beach S, I-II |
| 403.10 |
The AP ] B; the A. and P. S,
I-II; the AP C |
| 407.9 |
New York ] C; N. Y. S, I-II |
| 408.7 |
section ] C; Section S, I-II |
