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The following symbols are used: C (Cowley—"The Author's Final Version," 1951), F (Fitzgerald—a revision marked by the autor in his copy of the novel), S (Serial—Scribner's Magazine, 1934), I (first edition, 1934), II (The Scribner Library edition, 1960).

3.1 the shore ] the pleasant shore S, I-II
3.2 stood ] stands S, I-II
3.4 cooled ] cool S, I-II
3.4 stretched ] stretches S, I-II
3.5 Now ] Lately S, I-II
3.6 in 1925 ] a decade ago S, I-II
3.7-8 April; in those days only ] F; April. Now, many bungalows cluster near it, but when this story begins only S, I-II; April. Only C
3.17 had come ] came S, I-II
3.21 had floundered ] floundered S, I-II
4.8 this ] one S, I-II
7.21 raft, and who ] raft who C
10.28 water, followed ] water. He was followed C
10.29 followed ] waded after them C
12.6 Antheil ] Anthiel S, I-II
15.21-2 One of her husbands had been a cavalry officer and one an army doctor ] Her first husband, Rosemary's father, had been an army doctor and her second a cavalry officer C
16.1 Rosemary ] Rosemary Hoyt C
16.4 felt that it was time she were ] felt it was time that she was C
19.5 Eleven years ago ] Ten years ago S, I-II; Eleven years before C
19.6 were ] had been C
19.7 were ] had been C
19.27 the ] that C
20.19 was ] were S, I-II
22.18 the Paris Herald ] The New York Herald I; The New York Herald S, II; the Paris edition of the New York Herald C
24.23 uninterested ] disinterested S, I-II
24.30 Señor ] Signor S, I-II
28.1 as nearly sulky ] nearly as sulkily I-II; feeling nearly as sulky C
29.32 and that ] and one that C
35.16 fascinated ] fascinating C
35.24 destinies buried under the compromises of how many years. ] destinies. C
36.7 To resume Rosemary's point of view it should be said that, under ] Still under S; Under C
36.9 she and her mother ] they S; Rosemary and her mother C
36.28 arrived, discovering ] arrived and discovered C
42.11 everyone ] eveyone II

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42.25 irrelevant ] irrelative S, I-II
46.17 him—this led up to the trouble in which he presently found himself. ] him. C
48.20 Iles de Lérins ] Isles des Lerins S, I-II
55.9 immejetely ] immejitly C
55.33 coo-coo ] cuckoo C
56.17 McKisco ] Kisco C
57.19 the latter ] he C
60.4 party ] parties S, I-II
61.10 words ] worlds C
63.16 rabbit ] rabit II
63.17 second—the latter ] second, who C
66.3-5 that in a few hours she would see the person whom she still referred to in her mind as "the Divers" on the beach. ] that a few hours later on the beach she would see the person whom she still referred to in her mind as "the Divers." C
69.22 onto ] to C
71.12 because ] due to the fact that S, I-II
72.19 thirteen ] twelve C
75.23 Württemberg ] Wurtemburg S, I-II
76.26 seven ] six S, I-II
78.6 Württembergers ] Wurtemburgers S, I-II
78.8 Old ] old S, I-II
79.2 Arts ] Art S, I-II
80.8 when ] then C
85.32 afterwards ] afterward C
90.14 Georgian ] Gerogian II
90.12 Films, to be ] Films. They were C
91.15 aviation port ] airport C
92.6 not ] sot II
95.6 the aforementioned qualities ] the qualities C
96.2 gracefully about above ] gracefully above C
97.5 whither ] to which C
102.5 Hengist ] Hengest S, I-II
104.4 and ] and the C
104.14 him ] Dick C
105.19 upon ] at C
106.2 he asked ] he had asked C
106.9 on a world ] on world S, I-II
108.13 No ] Not II
109.10 faces ] facees C
111.19 Diaghilev ] Diaghileff S, I-II
117.5 friend ] friends I-II
119.10,12 100,000 Chemises ] 1000 chemises S, I-II
119.30 Canossa ] Ferrara S, I-II, C
120.1-122.5 hour it had become ] hour of standing. . . . It had become S, I-II
120.14 de Saint-Ange ] des Saintes ˄ Anges S; des Saintes-Anges I-II
122.6 had become ] became C
122.31 Brizard ] Brizzard S, I-II
122.31 Fernet-Branca ] André Fernet ˄ Blanco S, I-II; Fernet ˄ Branca C
122.32 Rocher ] Rochet S, I-II
125.4 had been awakened ] had awakened S, I
125.10 he is here ] is he here C
127.5 over ] more than C
128.22 Why you ] Why are you C
129.26 conservatism ] conversation I-II, C
130.13 whereon ] at which C
131.4 Mosby ] Moseby S, I-II
132.10 concessionnaire ] concessionaire I-II
133.15 about ] of S, I-II
133.21 step ] drop C
136.2 arrondissement ] arrondisement S, I-II
136.7 Ashamed ] He was ashamed C
138.6-7 mouth, her face getting big as it came up to him; he ] mouth. He C
139.29 Latin Quarter ] French Latin quarter S, I-II
141.5 advised ] told C
145.8 blanket ] blankets C
145.32 unexceptionably ] unexceptionally S, I-II, C
147.17 doors ] door C
152.2 bier ] beer C
152.16 aeroplane ] airplane C
152.18 Damenstiftgasse ] Damenstiff Strasse S, I-II
153.18 at ] in S, I-II
153.27 criterion ] criteria S, I-II
154.17 yourself. Once ] yourself—once S, I-II
154.24 subject. No good sense." ] subject." S, I-II
154.28 people—they were the illusions ] people; illusions S, I-II
155.5 lolling ] looling II
155.7-9 destiny. Best ] destiny. Moreover it is confusing to come across a youthful photograph of some one known in a rounded maturity and gaze with a shock upon a fiery, wiry, eagle-eyed stranger. Best S, I-II
156.16 cortex ] cervical I-II
157.7 Kraepelin ] Krapaelin S, I-II
157.9 If ] Though C

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157.13-15 You have the same stupid and unaging American face, except I know you're not stupid, Dick." ] You are still a carrot top. You have the same unaging American face." C <You are still a carrot-top." ¶Dick's eyes were of a bright, hard blue. His nose was somewhat pointed and there was never any doubt at whom he was looking or talking— and this is a flattering attention, for who looks at us?—glances fall upon us, curious or disinterested, nothing more. F>
157.16 war—you ] war," Dick said. "You C; war" Dick said, "You F
158.5 privates ] private soldiers S, I-II
158.13 Krenzegg ] Kreuzegg II
159.6 plateau ] eminence S, I-II
159.12 Outside, some ] Some S, I-II
159.13 one ] they S, I-II
159.20 room. Pushing ] room; pushing S, I-II
159.24 first ] first one S, I-II
160.1 about the ] about the time of the S, I-II
160.1 of ] of a C
160.3 thence ] there C
160.16 (2) ] [page] 2—Follow this form with the breaks here F; [page] 2—C
160.23 (3) ] [page] 3—(ect) F; 3—C
161.18; 162.12; 162.27; 163.29 (2) ] [page] 2—C
161.31 in ] on C
162.21 farcical ] farcicle S, I-II, C
167.7 thirteen ] eleven S, I-II; twelve C
175.9 Interlaken ] Interlachen S; Interlacken I-II
175.22 horizons ] horizon C
177.4 gladiolus ] gladiola S, I-II
178.19-20 path, where, in a moment, a shadow cut across it—she ] path; where, in a moment, a shadow cut across it—she F; path—where in a moment a shadow cut across it. She S, I-II
180.22 shoulder—then apart. ] shoulder. S, I-II
180.23 record.—Have ] record," she said. "—Have S, I-II; record,—Have F
181.4 table, male eyes ] table, eyes S, I-II
181.19 obsession ] obsessions C
181.26 service ] Service S, I-II; army C
182.3 but Dick ] but one day at luncheon Dick C
184.4 morning ] day C
188.7 it ] is C
192.12 who ] whom I-II
193.9,31 Kraepelin ] Krapaelin S, I-II
193.17 Dent du Midi ] Jugenhorn S, I-II
193.22 trainbands ] trained bands S; trained-bands I-II
193.31 sie ] siz I-II
194.7 down into port ] down port S, I-II
195.3 Kursaal ] Kursal I-II
197.19 four ] five S, I-II
199.24 schizoid ] schizzoid I
200.1 Guards ] guards' S, I-II
203.27 all so ] also C
205.12 Rocher ] Rochers S, I-II
207.19 afterward ] after that C
208.19 over ] more than C
209.30 Grotto ] Grotte S, I-II
212.9 Tommy ] Abe North F, C
212.23-4 beach with my husband and two children. ] beach near my home above the Mediterranean with my husband and two children and our dear friends. F, C
212.31-2 Yes . . . people." ] omitted C
213.14 written: ] written from Paris: C
217.23 McBeth ] MacBeth S, I-II
218.9 aeroplanes ] airplanes C
218.10 mighty ] might II
219.30 into ] in S, I-II
220.6 Topsy's birth, he ] the birth of Topsy, their second child, he C
223.18 this ] the C
226.5 just over ] almost S, I-II
227.23 Gregorovious ] Gregorovius S, I-II, C
228.32 twenty-four hours ] two days C
230.11 have ] haven't S, I-II
230.20 Privatdocent ] Privat docent S, I; Privat-dozent II, C
232.1 pair ] pairs C
236.1 Dick ] One July morning Dick C
236.5 Prokofiev's Love for Three Oranges. ] Prokofieff's Love of Three Oranges. S; Prokofieff's "Love of Three Oranges." I-II
236.8 his bed-lamp and ] the light and S; his bed-lamp light and I-II
238.1 seven ] eight S, I-II
238.15 ergo ] ego C
239.24 workshop ] workshops C
239.30 uninstructed ] instructed S, I-II, C

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240.25 as if imprisoned in ] as imprisoned in S, I; as imprisoned as in II
243.14 with nail scissors ] with scissors S; with a nail scissors I-II
244.19 Though it was couched ] Couched C
245.3 upon ] at C
246.22 nine ] six S, I-II
247.7 and started ] and he started C
248.1 crowd, a crowd which ] crowd, which C
249.20 opposite ] apposite S, I-II
250.8 ah ] et C
250.9 Madame ] Dame C
250.21 schizophrenic ] "schizophrêne" S, I-II
256.13; 257.24; 258.7,24; 260.14 Chillicheff ] Chillichev C
257.7 or ] nor S, I-II
257.7 men's ] their S, I-II
257.32 inordinately, meanwhile ] inordinately and S; inordinately ˄ meanwhile I-II; inordinately C
259.11 stood ready to depart ] departed I-II; lingered C
262.8 steins ] helles S, I-II; seidels C
263.9 nine ] eight C
265.8 rolled up through ] rolled through C
266.16 the income ] it S, I-II
268.17 the steamer's ] its S, I-II
269.13 couturières ] couturiers S, C
269.31 After ] Early in the morning, after C
270.11 hoofs ] hoops I-II
270.28 two ] one C
270.31 Nazionale ] Nationale S
270.33-271.1 discovered from . . . that ] read . . . and learned about C
271.14 three ] four S, I-II, C
271.16 twenty-one . . . thirty-seven ] twenty-two . . . thirty-eight S, I-II, C
276.12 twenty-one ] twenty-two S, I-II, C
276.13 eight ] nine C
285.5 sniffling ] sniffing C
288.16 Nazionale ] Nationale S, I-II
289.27 for the ] the C
290.5 mousseux ] mousseaux I-II
291.12 Birmingham ] Atlanta C
294.16,23 saoul ] sault S; saoûl I-II
296.7 Guards ] guards' S, I-II, C
301.10 on which ] whereon S, I-II
301.18 sempre diretto ] semper dritte S, I-II
301.18 sinistra ] sinestra S, I-II
301.18 destra ] dextra S, I-II
301.22 Piazza di Spagna ] Piazzo d'Espagna S, I-II
306.18 palpable ] palatable C
309.28 telegram ] cable S, I-II
311.19 ship ] trip C
313.6 with ] to S, I-II
313.14 such a rate ] such rate C
314.3 Wassermanns ] Wassermans S, I-II, C
314.15 Chilean ] Chilian S, I-II
317.3 the late thirties ] the forties S, I-II; one's late thirties C
316.7,25; 319.22 Chile ] Chili S, I-II
320.17 Devereux ] Charles S, I1934
320.20 in which ] wherein S, I-II; where C
320.27 grata ] gratis I-II
323.6 the Paris Herald ] The New York Herald S, I-II; the New York Herald C
327.18 cess ] 'cess S, I-II
328.8-9 But what absorbed Dick after the disappearance of the caravan was the question as to what ] But the question that absorbed Dick after the disappearance of the caravan was to what C
331.2-3 been rented again, so ] long been rented for the summer, so S; been rented again for the summer, so I-II, C
331.6 are ] is S, I-II
331.11 eight and six ] eleven and nine S, I-II; seven and nine C
332.4 but content ] but were content C
332.4 regimen ] regimentation S, I-II
332.13 six ] nine S, I-II; seven C
332.24 Owing ] Due S, I-II
333.6-7 For example with the great quantity of heavy baggage—presently ] Presently C
334.1 Kabyle . . . Sabæan ] Kyble . . . Sabian S; Kyble . . . Sabaean I-II
336.27 itself ] herself I-II
337.11 La ] El S, I-II, C
342.13 Mouton ] Moutonne S, I-II
344.7 Salaud ] Salaut S; Saland I1934
345.8 him, about which she could only guess in ] him which she could only guess at in S; him, about which she could only guess at in I-II
346.11 playing ] plaing C
346.29 dress, the ] dress and the C
347.23 nous autres héros," he said, "il faut ] nous héros," he said, "il nous faut
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S, I-II; nous autres héros il faut C
348.6 Légion Étrangère ] Corps d'Afrique du Nord S, I-II; Bataillon d'Afrique C
349.8 bear ] hear C
349.23 Lady Caroline ] Lady Sibly-Biers S, I-II
350.24 enfantillage ] enfance S; enfanterie I-II
351.19 here ] there C
352.3 lesion ] lessening C
353.16 them ] it S, I-II
354.2 waiting ] attendant S, I-II; Divers' C
357.17 Niçois ] Niçoise S, I-II
361.16 killed, that ] killed and that C
361.20 expressed ] personified S, I-II
362.1 drink ] drinking C
362.13 the wrench it was ] it was the wrench C
363.30 hook ] nook I
364.5 four ] five S, I-II, C
364.8 summers ] years S, I-II, C
364.14 four ] five S, I-II, C
365.1 Last summer ] Summer before last C
365.5 afterwards ] afterward C
365.8 thought ] think C
367.26 "Château" ] the Mexican C
368.33 Abrams's ] Abram's I-II
380.18 from what ] than I-II
382.6 Kornilov ] Korniloff S, I-II
383.32 arose ] rose C
384.15 to find ] finding S, I-II
388.30 up putting ] up to him and, putting C
389.12 "Profession ] "My profession C
389.31 bottles, empty ] bottles, the empty C
391.28 Sibly ] Sibley I-II
395.22 Monsieur ] M. C
398.18 "Ça va." ] omitted C
399.24 purse. It ] purse—and Dick recognized it as he saw it. It S, I-II
399.29-33 en," Dick called after him, "when . . . here?" ] en," Dick identified him as the man who had once hailed him in the . . . five years before. ¶"When . . . here?" he called after him. S, I-II
399.31 Rue de Saint-Ange ] Rue de St. Anges S; Due de Saints Anges I; Rue de Saints Anges II
400.31 victims ] dupes S, I-II
401.11 principle ] principal I-II
401.21 "I never did go in for making love to dry loins," said Dick. ] omitted C
403.2 high ] righ II
403.10 The AP ] the A. and P. S. I-II; the AP C
407.9 New York ] N. Y. S, I-II