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This collation comprises the substantive and accidental readings in the documents listed (with corresponding symbols in order of composition or publication) that vary from the authoritative text of the poem in the Eversley Edition (1907), which Tennyson and his son annotated. As a matter of convenience and to save space, Tennyson is referred to as AT and his wife as ET. All proofs are for Macmillan's Magazine.

MS1 Incomplete autograph manuscript, Harvard; lacks ll. 1-25, 56-59, 124-132, 164 through part of 203, 236-239, 241-280
MS2 Autograph manuscript, Trinity College, Cambridge
MS3 ET's manuscript with AT's emendations, Yale
P1 Galley proof with AT's corrections, Tennyson Research Centre
P2 Page proof with AT's corrections, Mr. W. S. G. Macmillan
P3 Page proof with AT's corrections, Berg Collection, NYPL
P4 Page proof with Richard Clay's and George Grove's corrections, Berg Collection, NYPL; lacks the last page (ll. 271-280)
P5 Page proof with AT's corrections, Berg Collection, NYPL
P5(alt.) Alternate version of Oread passage (single line for ll. 188-191) and l. 192, tipped in on P5
P6 Page proof with printer's query and AT's signature, Berg Collection, NYPL
M Macmillan's Magazine, 18 (May, 1868), [1]-9
S Every Saturday, 5 (May 2, 1868), 575-576
G The Holy Grail and Other Poems. London: Strahan and Co., 1870
G(A) The Holy Grail, and Other Poems. Boston: Fields, Osgood, & Co., 1870

The methods used for recording both textual variations and alterations in the manuscripts are those detailed by Fredson Bowers in his article, 'The Transcription of Manuscripts: The Record of Variants', SB, 29 (1976), 212-264, and exemplified in his apparatus for the definitive ACLS-Harvard edition of William James's Works (1975- ). For ease in comparing the variant readings, as many alterations in the manuscripts as possible have been included in the list of variants. An ampersand for 'and', 'ye' for 'the', and abbreviations for 'which', 'should', and 'could' have not been considered variants; but where a variant in word, phrase, or line in a manuscript involves such a convention or abbreviation, it is reproduced as written.

The number introducing each recorded variant is the line number of the Eversley Edition (and Ricks, pp. 1206-1217). Numbers separated by a slanting stroke, for example 50/51, indicate a line or lines, as the case may be, that existed in an antecedent text but not in Eversley. The lemma—the reading to the left of the bracket—is that of the authoritative text. The rejected variants follow in chronological order to the right of the bracket. If the sigil—the symbol for one of the collated texts listed above—does not appear to the right of the bracket, the reading in that state of the text is the same as that of Eversley, except for the passages and the final page that are lacking in MS1 and P4 respectively. To warn of this exception, the inclusive lines are recorded in the proper sequence numerically as lacking. Also in P1 the

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beginning word that has been torn away in lines 1 and 2 is so designated. Readings resulting from AT's, George Grove's, or Richard Clay's alterations of the printed text in proofs are distinguished by AT, G, or C and a slanting stroke before the proof number (i.e., AT/P1, G/P4, C/P4, for example). On P2, where the poet, after correcting the Oread passage extensively, then deleted it and inserted the bowdlerized version, the two stages of alteration have been designated AT1 and AT2. When autograph alterations of the printed text result in the reading of the authoritative text (as they do in many instances), the sigil is placed out of chronological order immediately to the right of the bracket for emphasis and to save space. The alteration is easily understood by comparing the printed variant in the designated proof with the lemma. In some instances, the reading of the lemma existed early in a manuscript(s), became altered (deliberately or through error in copying or typesetting), and then was reverted to. For clarity in these circumstances, the sigil or sigils for the text in which the early reading is the same as the lemma is shown chronologically immediately to the right of the bracket and before the symbol for AT's or another's alteration of a printed text or before any variant reading if (as in a few cases) the return to the original reading is not the result of proofreading marks on one of the extant proofs. Since AT added lines extensively to the poem through the first stages of page proof (and there were occasional errors of omission), a number of words or lines do not exist in the complete passages of MS1 and in MS2, MS3, P1, P2 and P3; and the full lines on the Oread are of course omitted in P5(alt.), P6, and M. Such words or lines are accounted for by omit, followed by the appropriate sigil. A superscript 1 or 2 is used to identify one or the other of two identical words in the same line. A vertical stroke | indicates the ending of a line. A sigil, a dash, and another sigil (for example, MS1-P1) are used as a means of saving space to signify that a variant reading exists in MS1 and all subsequent states in which the line appears through the Lincoln galley proof (i.e., MS1, MS2, MS3, and P1).

Two arbitrary symbols have been employed in this Historical Collation: the section mark (§) and the double dagger (‡). The section mark indicates that the variant involves wholly or in part an alteration in a MS, the description of which does not appear in the Alterations in the Manuscripts and has been included instead in the Historical Collation. The double dagger indicates that the variant in the MS is part of an alteration not easily transferable to the Historical Collation, the details of which can be found in the Alterations in the Manuscripts.

When alterations in the MSS are included in the Historical Collation, the processes of revision are described in square brackets. The quoted text outside a revision in brackets is always the final version in a corrected MS. When no words precede the description of an alteration in a MS, the description applies to the lemma. Some readings are reproduced formulaically. In order to specify the words in the text which are affected by the description in square brackets, an asterisk (*) appears before the first word to which the description in square brackets applies. When there is no asterisk, the description in square brackets applies to all the words of a reading preceding the brackets, or the affected word or words are within the square brackets along with the description—usually the record of a deletion.

In descriptions of alterations in the MSS, over means a correction by writing over a letter(s) of a word on the original line; interlined (abbreviated intrl.) means added between lines. Above (ab.) positions an interlineation with respect to a word or words in a line which are usually deleted but sometimes are not actually crossed out (del. and undel.). Inserted (insrt.) refers to an addition in the margin or on the verso of a facing leaf. No distinction has been made between interlineations and insertions made with or without a caret or a guideline. In order to focus upon the alteration achieved rather than the means of achieving it, the general description altered from (alt. fr.) has been used frequently. Other abbreviations are as follows: aft. for after, bef. for before, bel. for below, transpd. for transposed, sg. qt. for single quote, and questn. mk. for question mark.

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(No heading and date)] MS1-P1; MACMILLAN'S MAGAZINE. | May, 1868. P2-M; Every Saturday, | May 2, 1868.] [upper left-hand corner] LUCRETIUS. [center of page] S
LUCRETIUS.] omit MS1-P1; ˜, P2-6
(No author and office)] MS1-P1; By ALFRED TENNYSON, | POET LAUREATE. P2-M; By ALFRED TENNYSON. AT/P2; BY ALFRED TENNYSON, POET LAUREATE. S
1-25 Lucilia . . . cried:] lacking MS1
1 Lucilia] Lucilia MS2-3; lacking P1
2 Her] lacking P1
4 tho'] though S
4 lov'd] loved MS2-G(A)
6 field,] AT/P3; ˜; MS2-P3
§7 master] Master [insrt. bel. del. insrt. 'husband' for del. 'Master' ab. del. 'Poet'] MS2
12 three∧hundred] ˜-˜ MS2-3
§13 Teacher,] omit [del. 'writer' ab. del. 'Master'] MS2; teacher∧ MS3-P3; ˜∧ AT/P2-3-G(A)
14 brook'd] brooked S
15 some] AT/P2-3; a MS2-P3
16 brew'd] brewed S
16 philtre] philter S, G(A)
‡18 this, . . . times,] ˜∧ . . . ˜∧ MS2
‡18 drink,] C/P4; ˜∧ MS2-P4
19 destroy'd] destroyed S
§20 labour] [ab. del. 'workings'] MS2; labor S, G(A)
21 And tickling] AT/P2-3; Tickled MS2-P3
21 brain within the man's] AT/P2-3, G/P4; part of the brain, and [& MS2] made MS2-P3; within the man's brain P4
22 Made havock] AT/P2-3; Havock MS2-P3; ˜ havoc S, G(A)
22 check'd] checked S
23 loathed] loath'd MS2-M, G, G(A)
23 himself;] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
25 mock'd] mocked S
25 calm,] ˜∧ MS3-S
25 cried:] ˜∧ MS2; ˜, MS3-M; ˜,— S; ˜; G; ˜.' (sg. qt. an error) G(A)
26 ¶ 'Storm (extra space between ¶s)] no ¶ ∧˜ MS1-3; no ¶ "˜ P1-3; ¶ "˜ (extra space between ¶s) AT/P2-3-S, G(A)
27 Rushing; . . . thunderbolt—] ˜, . . . ˜∧ MS1
28 Methought . . . fork—] As bright as noon against the livid heaven MS1
29 mountain-side,] MS2, AT/P2-3; ˜-˜∧ MS1,3-P3
29 show'd] showed S
31 Blanching] Flashing MS1
32 yester-eve] yestereve MS1
33 'Storm, (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜∧ (no extra space between ¶s) MS1-P1, S; ∧˜∧ (extra space between ¶s) P2-4; ∧˜, (extra space between ¶s) C/P4-M; "˜, (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
33 1dreams,] MS1, C/P4; ˜∧ MS2-P4, S
33 holy] omit MS1
33 Gods,] MS1 C/P4; ˜∧ MS2-3; gods, P1-4, S
33 2dreams!] MS2-P1, AT/P2, C/P4; ˜, I thought MS1; ˜∧ P2-4; ˜, S
34-36 For . . . seem'd] omit MS1
34 waken'd] wakened S
34 Perchance∧] AT/P3; I think MS2-P3; ˜, AT/P2
35 come] AT/P2-3; chance MS2-P3
36 seem'd] seemed S
37 Nature;] Nature— MS1
38 Crack'd;] MS2-3, AT/P3; ˜, MS1; Cracked; P1-3, S
39 universe,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS1-P3, S
40 inane,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS1-P3
43 For ever] For ever & for ever MS1; for-ever S, G(A)
43 mine,] ˜— MS1
43 it—] ˜∧ MS1, G(A)
44 dog] hound MS1
§46 function of the woodland] woodland ['office' del.] function MS1
46 next!] ˜, ye Gods— MS1
47 I thought] It seemed MS1
‡47 Sylla] Sulla MS1
48 rainlike] rain-like MS3
48 earth,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS1-P3
49 dash'd] struck MS1; dashed S
49 meadow,] ˜∧ MS1-2
50 dragon warriors] AT/P2-3; warriors MS1-P3
50 Cadmean] MS1-2; G/P4; Cadmeän MS3; Cadmeän, P1-4, S
50 teeth,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ but girls MS1; ˜: for these MS2-P3
50/51 Niddin[g] MS1
51 For . . . me,] omit MS1
51 For these] AT/P2-3; omit MS2-P3
51 me] AT/P2-3; ˜, but girls MS2-P3
52 But girls, Hetairai,] AT/P2-3; Naked Hetierie MS1; Naked Hetairai, MS2-P3
52-53 curious . . . animalisms,] omit MS1
53 animalism,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
53 vile . . . that] such . . . wh MS1
54 mulberry-faced Dictator's orgies] ˜∧˜ Dictator revell MS1
55 Than] That (error) MS1

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55 Gods.] ˜: MS2
56-59 And . . . by day?] lacking MS1
56-57 yell'd . . . yell'd] yelled . . . yelled S
60 ¶ 'Then, (extra space between ¶s)] no ¶ ∧˜∧ MS1; ¶ ∧˜, (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ¶ ∧˜, (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; ¶ "˜, (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
60 then,] AT/P3; omit MS1; ˜∧ MS2-P3
60 utter] a sudden MS1
60 gloom] ˜ at last MS1
60 the breasts] omit MS1
61-64 and . . . and] omit MS1
61 sword] ˜, AT/P2
62 direct,] AT/P2, C/P4; ˜∧ MS2-P4, S
63 pierce,] MS2, AT/P3; ˜∧ (error) MS3-P3
§64 beauty;] ˜∧ MS2; [semicolon added] MS3
§64 stared,] ˜∧ MS1-2; [comma added] MS3
64 fire,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS1-P3
65 The . . . Ilion,] AT/P2-3, omit MS1-P3
66 them,] ˜∧ MS2
66 scorch'd] MS1-3, AT/P3; scorched P1-3, S
66 that] till MS1
67 ¶ 'Is (extra space between ¶s)] no ¶ ∧˜ MS1; ¶ ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ¶ ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; ¶ "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
67 thine,] ˜∧ MS1
68 Because] Beccause (error) S
§69 ev'n] [ab. undel. 'evn' over 'e'en'] MS3; even S
69 offer'd] MS1-3, AT/P3; offered P1-3, S
70 proœmion] MS1-3, AT/P2-3; proæmion (error) P1-3
71 field,] ˜∧ MS1
73 'Deity (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS1-P1, S; ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
§73 worshippers.] worshipers [first 'p' in 'worshippers' del.]: MS1
74 profanely. Which] ˜: which MS1
76 who,] ˜∧ MS1-S, G(A)
‡77 envy,] ˜∧ MS1
‡77 hate∧] ˜, MS2
‡77 pity,] ˜∧ MS1-3
‡77 scorn,] C/P4; ˜∧ MS1-P4
78 great] quiet MS1
79 center'd in] compast with MS1; centred ˜ S; centr'd ˜ G(A)
80 'Nay (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS1-P1, S; ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
80 canst] can'st MS1-2, AT/P2, P4-G; cans't (error) MS3-P3
81 touch'd] touched S
84 steaming slaughter-house of] shambles of eternal [underline bel. 'ern' of 'eternal' to indicate repetition of 'eternal' in l. 79] MS1
85-92 'Ay . . . Gods,] ∧But surely thee I meant not when I took MS1
85 'Ay (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ∧˜ extra space between ¶s) P2-M; "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
‡87 hers,] AT/P3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
88 neat-herds] AT/P3; goatherds MS2-P3
88 abroad;] AT/P2; ˜: MS2-P5, S
92 Gods,] ˜. (error) S
93 Poet-like] Poetlike MS1-2
93 called] MS1; call'd MS2-3
94 Calliope∧] Calliope, MS1
94-95 to . . . take] omit MS1
95 Ay,] ˜∧ MS2-3
95 Kypris] AT/P5; Kupris MS2-P5
96 That . . . to . . . forth] that . . . | To . . . ˜ MS1
97 The all-generating] the all-generative MS1
97 and genial heat] omit MS1
98 Nature,] ˜∧ MS1
98 she] her heat MS1
98 thro' the thick blood] the rough breasts MS1
98 thro'] MS2-3; through P1-S, G(A)
99 cattle,] Cattle∧ MS1
99 large,] MS1-2, AT/P2; ˜∧ MS3-S, G(A)
99 glad] gay MS1
101 flowers:] ˜; MS1; ˜∧ G(A)
103 ¶ 'The (extra space between ¶s)] no ¶ ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) MS1; ¶ ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ¶ ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; ¶ "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
103 Gods!] ˜? MS1
103 my] my MS1
104 Unfinish'd] Unfinished S
§104 if] MS1; if MS2; ['if' underlined] MS3
104-113 The . . . go.] omit MS1
105 wind,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
107 snow,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
113 1Gods,] ˜? MS1
113 the] The MS1
113 2Gods!] ˜? MS1, AT/P2
114 atoms,] ˜∧ MS1

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115 atomic∧ not] ˜—save that each of them | Were but one atom—˜ MS1
115 dissoluable,] ˜? MS1
116 Not . . . law?] Too foolish that, for MS1
§116 law?] ˜. MS2; [questn. mk. over period] MS3
116 My master held] my great Master holds MS1
117 That . . . believe.] That these are fashion'd in the form of men MS1
118 footsteps . . . his,] footstep . . . ˜∧ MS1
121 are, . . . deathless.] ˜∧ . . . ˜: MS1
121 Meant] meant MS1-3
123 Stumbles,] ˜∧ MS1
124-132 'Look . . . sees;] lacking MS1
124 'Look (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
125 Sun] MS2-3, AT/P2-3; sun P2-3
§125 Apollo,] ˜∧ [alt. fr. 'Apollos' (error)] MS3; ˜∧ P1
128 wreak'd] wreaked S
§130 tales] AT/P1; [alt. fr. 'toiles' (error)] MS3; toils (error) P1
132 spit—] ˜, MS2-P5; ˜; S
§132 1he] omit MS2; [intrl.] MS3
132 sees;] AT/P5; ˜, MS2-P5, S
133 altho'] MS2-3, AT/P5; ˜∧ MS1; although P1-5, S
133 seem,] ˜∧ MS1
134 lifts] sets MS1
135 feet] footstep MS1
135 those] the MS1
135 empurpled] impurpled S
136 halls] walls (error) P4-5
136 heaven;] ˜∧ MS1
§137 an eye] a sight MS1-2; [alt. fr. 'a sight' (ET's hand)] MS3
138 pain;] ˜: MS1-3
139 freezing] glazing MS1
§139 orb] eye MS1; [insrt. for del. 'eye'] MS2
140 last;] ˜∧ MS1; ˜: MS2-S, G(A)
141 fall'n] fallen MS1, S
142 vain,] ˜∧ MS1
144 me,] ˜∧ MS1
144 altho'] although S
145 Blinding,] omit MS1
145 not,] ˜∧ MS1
145 nor at all can tell] neither knows he whether I MS1
146 Whether . . . myself,] omit MS1
147 Or] Shall MS1
147 says,] ˜∧ MS1-2
149 he . . . holds] I . . . hold MS1
150 careless,] ˜∧ MS1
150 wherefore need he care] of our deeds & us MS1
§151 Greatly] What need I *greatly [intrl.] care MS1
151 at once] omit MS1
151 troubled,] ˜∧ MS1-2
153 —ay,] ∧˜∧ MS1; —˜∧ MS2-3
153 stone,] ˜∧ MS1-3
154-155 and palsy . . . age—] omit MS1
§154 palsy,] ˜∧ MS2; [comma added] MS3
154 death-in-life] MS2, AT/P2-3; ˜∧˜∧˜ (error) MS3-P3
155 all,] ˜∧ MS1
156 nakednesses,] ˜∧ MS1
157 lust,] ˜∧ MS1
157 unspeakable,] ˜∧ MS1
158 at my hearth∧] to my house, MS1
§159 Not welcome,] Unwelcome, MS1; ['Not' ab. del. 'Un' of 'Unwelcome'] MS2
159 miring every dish] fouling all the feast MS1
160 phantom∧husks] MS1; ˜-˜ MS2-3
160 done,] ˜∧ MS1
§161 fleeting] MS2, AT/P2-3; ['eeting' ab. undel. 'ying' of 'flying'] MS1; floating (error) MS3-P3
161 thro'] through S
161 universe,] ˜∧ MS1
163 insanity?] ˜. MS1-S, G(A)
164-203 How . . . me?] lacking MS1
164 'How (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
166 thinner, . . . thicker,] AT/P3; ˜∧ . . . ˜∧ MS2-P3
167 snow, . . . in,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ . . . ˜∧ MS2-P3
169 tumult] AT/P2-3; ˜, MS2-P3
169 doors,] MS2-3, AT/P2-3; ˜∧ P1-3
170 down,] MS2, AT/P2-3; ˜∧ (error) MS3-P3
170 they∧] ˜, MS3-G(A)
171 basest,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
‡173 ¶ 'Can (extra space between ¶s)] no ¶ ∧˜ MS2, P1-3; ¶ [marked with bracket to show indentation] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS3; ¶ ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) AT/P2-3-M; ¶ ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) S; ¶ "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
179 o'er] oer MS2
‡179 —ay,] ∧˜, MS2-S, G(A); —˜∧ G

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180 men?] ˜. MS2-S, G(A)
181 'But (extra space between ¶s)] ∧˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1, S; ∧˜ (extra space between ¶s) P2-M; "˜ (extra space between ¶s) G(A)
184 there?] MS2-3, AT/P2-3; ˜! P1-3
‡186 through] thro' MS2-3
‡186 wood,] AT/P1,3; ˜— MS2-P3
‡186 quivering—] ˜, AT/P1
187 Nymph] MS2, AT/P1-3; Nymphs (error) MS3-P3
187 Faun;] MS2, AT/P1,3; Fauns; (error) MS3-P3; ˜— AT/P2
188 Oread—] MS2, AT/P1,3, AT2/P2; ˜∧ MS3; ˜. P1-3; ˜—(AT1/P2; ˜ (AT/P5, S; ˜, P6, M
188-191 how . . . peaks—] omit AT2/P2, P5 (alt.)-M
‡188 how] AT/P1,3; —how (error) MS2; How MS3-P3
189 slippery] MS2, AT1/P2, AT/P3; slipping (error) MS3-P3
189 sides,] MS2; ˜∧ (error) MS3-P5, S
190 knees∧] ˜, MS2-P5, S
191 bosom-peaks—] AT/P3; ˜-˜∧ MS2; ˜∧˜— MS3, AT/P1; ˜∧˜. P1-3; ˜-˜) AT1/P2, AT/P5, S
191 who] MS2, AT/P1,3, AT1/P2; Who (error) MS3-P3; and AT2/P2, P5 (alt.)-M
191 runs] she ˜ AT2/P2, P5 (alt.)-M
192 rest—] MS2-3, AT/P1,3, AT1/P2; ˜? P1-3
‡192 1satyr,] AT/P1,5, AT1/P2; Satyr,— MS2; Satyr, AT2/P2, P5 (alt.); Satyr— MS3; ˜— P1-3; ˜; AT/P3-P5, S
‡192 2a] A MS2
‡192 2satyr,] AT/P1,5, AT1/P2; Satyr— MS2; ˜— MS3-P3; ˜; AT/P3-P5; Satyr, AT2/P2, P5 (alt.)
‡192 see,] AT2/P2; ˜— MS2-S, G(A); ˜∧ P5 (alt.)
§197 his rough] AT/P2-3; with his MS2; against [ab. del. 'with'] his MS3; against his P1-3
199 hate,] ˜∧ MS2
199 spit,] ˜∧ MS3
§200 heel,] AT/P2-3; ['heel' ab. 'foot,'; 'foot' del.] MS2; ˜∧ (error) MS3-P3
201 ankle-wing] ancle-wing MS2-3
203 Shameless] ˜; MS2-3; ˜, P2-3
203 me?] AT/P2-3; ˜: MS2-P3
203 Catch] catch MS1-2
203 her,] ˜∧ MS1
203 goat-foot:] goatfoot! MS1; goatfoot: MS2-G(A)
203 nay,] ˜∧ MS1
204 , hide] omit MS1
204 them,] ˜∧ MS1
204 million-myrtled wilderness,] MS2, AT/P2,5; ye brakes & bushes! MS1; ˜-˜ ˜∧ (error) MS3-P5
205 And cavern-shadowing laurels,] omit MS1
205 hide!] AT/P2-3; omit MS1; ˜; P1-3
205 wish—] AT/P5; ˜∧ MS2-P5, S
206 What?—that] AT/P5; To peer MS1-P5; ˜?∧˜ S
206 the bush were leafless?] AT/P5; behind the bushes, MS1; behind the laurels, MS2-P5
206 whelm] mix MS1
208 I know you careless] MS3-P4; AT/P5; ˜ ˜ ˜ shadows MS1; Careless, ˜ ˜ ˜ ˜ MS2, AT/P3, G/P4, P5
‡208 , behold, to you∧] AT/P5; ∧ to you I call, MS1; ∧ to you∧ MS2, AT/P3, G/P4, P5; ∧ to you, to you, MS3-P3; ∧ careless, to you∧ (error) P4
209 childly] G/P4; ancient MS1; chilly (error) P4, S
209 wont] AT/P1, G/P4; want (error) P1, P4, S
209 ancient use] custom, MS1
209 I call—] call to you, MS1
210 securely as yourselves—] a life as pure as yours, MS1
211 No . . . monkey-spite,] final order AT/P2-3; followed l. 212 MS2-P3
211 narrowing envy,] no ambition, MS1; ˜ ˜; (error) MS3
‡211 monkey-spite,] covetousness∧ MS1; ˜∧ ˜, MS2; ˜-˜∧ (error) MS3
212 No . . . none:] final order AT/P2-3; omit MS1; preceded l. 211 MS2-P3
213-217 No . . . majesties] omit MS1
213 pine∧] MS2-3, AT/P2-3; ˜, P1-3
214 neighbours] neighbors S, G(A)
214 grass,] AT/P3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
214 take] AT/P2-3; drink MS2-P3
218 Of settled, sweet,] The pure MS1
218 life.] G/P4; quiet ˜— MS1; life— MS2-P4, S
219 monster] monsters (error) MS3
220 hands] MS1-3, AT/P2,5; hand (error) P1-5
220 will,] C/P4; ˜∧ MS1-P4
221 backward] MS1-3, AT/P5; backwards (error) P1-5
221 his;] ˜— MS1
221 and spoils] who breaks MS1

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222 My . . . great;] The love I had of life wh was but small, MS1
222 great;] AT/P3; ˜, MS2-P3
223-225 For . . . grew] omit MS1
226 Tired] Sick MS1
227 Or] Tired MS1
229 Crown'd] Crowned S
229 two,] ˜∧ MS1
230 And . . . fade,] omit MS1
231 I,] ˜∧ MS1
231 find] feel MS1
231 myself,] ˜∧ MS1
232 myself?—] AT/P2-3; it: thats MS1; ˜?∧ MS2-P3
232 our] MS1-2, AT/P2-3; Our (error) MS3-P3
232 privilege—] ˜∧ MS1
233 has heart to do] cd dream of MS1
233 it?] ˜∧ MS1
233 And] & O MS1
234 dragg'd] draggd MS1; dragged S
234 thus?] ˜∧ MS1
235 I;] ˜, S
235 he,] ˜∧ MS1
235 who] that MS1
235 her∧] MS1; ˜, MS2-S, G(A)
236-239 Whose . . . air,] lacking MS1
237 When,] ˜∧ MS2-S, G(A)
239 air,] ˜∧ MS2-3
§240 heart.] ˜ [alt. fr. 'breast']; MS2; ˜ [ab. del. 'breast']: MS3
241-280 And . . . well!] lacking MS1
242 now!] AT/P2-3; ˜: MS2-P3
242 'And . . . now (spaced down a l.)] ∧and . . . ˜ (not spaced down) MS2-P3; ∧˜ . . . ˜ (spaced down a l.) AT/P2-3-S; "˜ . . . ˜ (spaced down a l.) G(A)
244 Nature,] AT/P2, C/P4; ˜∧ MS2-P4, S
245 man,] AT/P2; ˜∧ MS2-G(A)
246 Dash] AT/P3; Strike MS2-P3
246 anew] AT/P5; afresh MS2-P5
247 Thro'] MS2-3; Through P1-G(A)
247 more,] ˜∧ MS2-3
248 flower:] ˜— MS2-S, G(A)
§250 Shatter'd] MS2; Shattered [alt. fr. 'shattereth' (error)] MS3; Shattered S
251 pieces,—] AT/P3; ˜∧— MS2-3; ˜,∧ P1-3
§255 even] ev'n MS2; [ab. del. 'e'em' (error)] MS3
255 long laid] C/P4; ˜-˜ MS2-P4, S
257 Vanishing] MS2-3, AT/P1; Fanishing (error) P1
257 2void,] ˜∧ MS2
258 for ever,—] ˜ ˜∧— MS2-P3; forever, — S, G(A)
258 hour,] AT/P5; ˜∧ MS2-P5
260 That . . . wheel,] AT/P2-3; omit MS2-P3
261 That] MS2-P3; And AT/P2-3-G(A)
261 Fury's] MS2-3, AT/P1; fairy's (error) P1
262 hell] Hell MS2-3
264 for] MS2-3, AT/P2-3; omit (error) P1-3
264 Thou,] AT/P2-3; ˜∧ MS2-P3
266 Yearn'd] MS2-3, AT/P3; Yearned P1-3, S
266 wisest] Wisest MS2-3
266 wise,] AT/P3; Wise MS2-3; ˜∧ P1-3
268 pain,] ˜∧ MS2-3
271-280 I . . . well!'] lacking P4
273 air.'] ˜'. MS2; ˜." P1-3, P5-S, G(A)
274 With (extra space between ¶s)] ˜ (no extra space between ¶s) MS2-P1
275 in,] MS2-3, AT/P2-3; ˜. (error) P1-3
277 fail'd . . . shriek'd] failed . . . shrieked S
279 Clasp'd, kiss'd . . . wail'd] Clasped, kissed . . . wailed S
‡279 answer'd,] ˜∧ MS2-3; answered, S
‡279 'Care] 'it MS2-3; "It P1-3; "˜ AT/P3, P5-S, G(A)
‡279 not] AT/P3; is MS2-P3
‡279 thou!] AT/P3; done∧ MS2-3; done; P1-3
‡280 Thy duty] What [sg. qt. del. bef. 'What'] matters MS2; What matters MS3-P3, P5-S, G(A)
280 What is duty?] what ˜ ˜? MS2-3; All is over: AT/P3, P5-S, G(A)
280 Fare] fare MS2-3
280 well!'] ˜.' MS2-3; ˜!" P1-3, P5-S, G(A)