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Heading (D1). Following the system in Tanselle 1984, esp. p. 37, the arabic number following the letter designates the edition number. The rest of the heading is meant to offer a convenient shorthand designation in words for the edition under discussion. To say "First Edition" here would add no information to what is already conveyed by "D1," and it seems sensible to convey additional information in such headings whenever possible. Moreover, the phrases "original British" here and "original American" later emphasize a more important point than the simple priority in publication, by a few weeks, of the former over the latter.

Introductory discussion (following the D1 heading). For each edition treated in detail, one may wish to begin with some introductory commentary, partly to serve the same function for the edition that the earlier paragraphs did for the work, but also to assemble into a coherent narrative such evidence as there is regarding contracts, publication and copyright dates, the author's relations with the publisher, and the like. (On copyright, see Tanselle 1969.) In effect, all the kinds of details that come from sources outside the copies of the edition themselves can be gathered here, leaving the descriptions that follow to concentrate on the physical evidence. Many bibliographical descriptions in the past have placed such information in one or more sections called "Notes," following the treatment of physical details, and sometimes these sections are not narrative in form but are simply enumerations of relevant facts. This approach remains one possibility, of course, but I show here a different approach, which reflects more directly the concept of a bibliography as a work of historical scholarship. The crucial point is not the manner of presentation of the material but the underlying conception of the work: a bibliography is not a listing of points for identification but a historical account, partly biography and partly a segment of publishing history (which itself encompasses the history of the arts of book-making as well as economic and intellectual history). This view of bibliography underlies Bowers's Principles and his 1953, 1966, and 1969 essays; see also Tanselle 1984 (passim, but esp. pp. 2-3 and the references in footnote 3) and Tanselle 1985 (esp. pp. 46-61), as well as Vander Meulen 1985. Providing narrative introductions of the kind I illustrate here does serve to drive home the point—both to authors of bibliographies and to their readers—that bibliographies are histories and that, like all histories, they attempt to offer coherent readings of the past.

Different bibliographers will make different selections of details; what I show here seems to me one reasonable selection, but there are always more details that can be included. One point naturally to be kept in mind is what kind of scholarly coverage already exists. In the case of Melville, the existence of the Northwestern-Newberry Edition, with its historical and textual essays and records of variant readings, would make redundant in a bibliography an extensive account of the composition and reception of Melville's books or lists of variant readings. The research underlying a scholarly edition and that underlying a scholarly bibliography are complementary, and the published results can be complementary, too. Thus when, in the present introduction, I refer to the 79 substantive variants between the Harper and Bentley editions of Redburn, there is no need to record them, for they are already available in the Northwestern-Newberry volume, and readers of the bibliography would have been told in the general introduction to the whole work that for complete lists of variants they should turn to the Northwestern-Newberry Edition. I am free to be selective in my use of variants, and I have decided here that only one deserves mention, given the scale on which the bibliography is being written. (However, variants between copies of a single printing—such as those created by stop-press alterations or by type or plate wear—demand fuller treatment somewhere in the description, even if they have been reported in another work; see the paragraph on typography below.) Similarly, documentation of frequently used sources need not be repeated in each of these introductions; instead, the general introduction can explain, for example, that quotations from Melville's letters always come (unless otherwise specified) from Merrell R. Davis and William H. Gilman's edition (1960) or that certain kinds of detail always come (unless otherwise specified) from the Northwestern-Newberry Edition. Documentation would then be supplied only for unusual sources or for sources inconvenient to refer to without specific references (hence the citations here of particular pages in the volumes of Bentley Papers at the British Library). For those details repeated in this introduction from one of the later descriptions, documentation—if needed—would come at that later point, where the matter is likely to be more fully treated. I do not find any awkwardness in the shift from narrative in these introductions to the more formulaic style of the physical descriptions: the two parts deal with very different material. A formulaic rendering of dates, quotations, sums of money, and the like seems to resemble undigested raw material and is not the most effective way of conveying what is in fact a narrative. On the other hand, the formulaic style is generally more efficient in laying physical details out clearly and more convenient for readers who wish to check copies against the description. (Cf. Tanselle 1984, footnote 6.) I ought to add, however, that one should never hesitate to use sequential prose within a physical description when it seems to offer a clearer way to make certain statements.

Melville's earliest known reference to Redburn occurs in a letter of 5 June 1849 to Richard Bentley, who had published the British edition of Mardi and was to publish White-Jacket and The Whale. In view of the slow sales of Mardi, Melville took pains to emphasize that the new book would be "a thing of a widely different cast": "a plain, straightforward, amusing narrative of personal experience—the son of a gentleman on his first voyage to sea as a sailor—no metaphysics, no conic-sections, nothing but cakes & ale." Nevertheless, Bentley's reply, on 20 June, was disappointing: alluding to the sales of Mardi and the uncertain copyright situation, he felt that he could offer only £100 as an advance against half-profits (not the £150 that Melville wanted, much less the £210 paid for Mardi). By the time Melville wrote to Bentley on 20 July, Harper & Brothers had accepted the work and given it to the printer, and Melville assured Bentley that proof sheets could be sent "in the course of three weeks or so." Apparently they were sent fairly promptly, for Bentley published his edition (750 copies, two volumes each, at a guinea per set) on 29 September, in advance of American publication,


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as the agreement stipulated. (See Bentley Papers, Add. 46637, ff.72v-73, where the official publication date is recorded as 29 September—although Melville, in a letter to Lemuel Shaw on 6 October, stated that the book had been published "on the 25th of last month.") The book was entered in the Publishers' Circular for 1 October, in the list of new publications for the period 14-29 September; it was advertised as available on 28 September in the Athenaeum for 22 September and listed in that journal and the Literary Gazette on 29 September; and it was included in an advertisement for "Mr. Bentley's New Publications for the Month of October" in the 1 November number of Publishers' Circular.

Melville had read and marked the Harper proof sheets before sending a set to Bentley; but he had no opportunity to go over proofs of Bentley's edition, which, as it turned out, differed from the Harper edition in wording at 79 points (and at many more, of course, in spelling and punctuation). Only one of those differences, however, poses any question of textual authority, for all the others fall into one of three


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classes—obvious errors, the correction of obvious errors, and other alterations of the kind ordinarily made in Bentley's office (e.g., the substitution of British idioms). The one difference that may be a revision of Melville's is the substitution of "quick, small, and glittering" for "large and womanly" as the description of Harry Bolton's eyes in the third sentence of Chapter 18 in Volume 2 (Chapter 49 of the Harper edition). If both readings are Melville's, the Bentley reading is not necessarily the later one, for Melville could have made a late revision on the Harper proofs after sending one set to Bentley. (The Northwestern-Newberry editors conclude that, whoever wrote "quick, small, and glittering," it was the other wording that Melville wanted.)

Redburn had been alluded to in the London press a month before publication, in the Literary Gazette of 25 August (p. 630). During the autumn, Bentley advertised the book in the usual prominent journals—in the Athenaeum, for example, on 8, 15, and 22 September and 13 and 27 October, and in the Spectator on 29 September and 20 October. The earliest known review appeared in the Literary Gazette for 20 October (pp. 776-778), and a half-dozen more reviews came out before the end


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of the month. Although the long review in the November number of Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine (66:567-580) was unfavorable, most of the British reviews were laudatory; but even so the book did not sell well, for in an accounting two and a half years later (on 4 March 1852) Bentley reported that he still had on hand 415 of the 750 copies. The profit on the book at that time he reckoned at £23.12.6; and since he had paid Melville £100 (when Melville visited his London office on November 12: see Melville's journal; the payment is also recorded in the Bentley Papers, Add. 46676A, f.3), he incurred a deficit of £76.7.6. In an effort to reduce that deficit, he had some of the remaining sheets bound as single volumes and issued them with cancel title leaves dated 1853. At some point he also sold sheets to the remainder publisher T. C. Newby, who issued them (in two-volume sets?) with his own name on the spines. Bentley had no more reason to be pleased with the sales of Redburn than with those of Mardi.