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91.1/89.13 nothing. but . . . him] period not del.; 'but' interl. bef. 'It' ('I' del.); 'that annoyed him;' interl. ab. 'manner;' with guideline bef. semicolon
91.1-2/89.14 her timid; hard;] alt. fr. 'her timid hardness;' ('her' underscored in pencil); semicolon insrtd. bef. 'hardness' (final 'ness' del.)
91.2/89.14 arrogant] 'something' del. bef. 'arrogant'
91.10/89.22 afraid. and Clarissa did frighten people)] '& Clarissa did frighten people)' insrtd. aft. 'afraid.'
92.5-6/90.17-18 in, he] 'he always saw through Clarissa' insrtd. for del. 'and he had his ways of making her feel it.' ('it.' not stricken in del.)
92.13/90.25 looking] final 'ing' insrtd. for del. 'ed'
92.13-21/90.25-91.6 (The place . . . bird-cages.)] parens. insrtd.
93.7/91.19-20 felt . . . old] 'had sat down by' insrtd. with guideline over del. period aft. 'felt'; 'o' insrtd. aft. del. 'O'
93.14-16/91.25-26 botanist. . . . shoulders] 'marching off in thick boots with a black tin collecting box slung between her shoulders' insrtd. aft. del. '(she wore always a black tin collecting-box slung between her shoulders; marched off in thick boots with a great stick.)'; period aft. 'botanist' not del.
94.14/92.24-25 2something] 'something' insrtd. bef. 'gentle, different' ('different' del.)
94.28/93.13-14 hurt her] 'after seeing her with Dalloway' insrtd. aft. 'her'
95.6/93.18-19 wood; [h]e talking] semicolon ab. undel. period; 'H' del. without adding lower case; final 'ing' insrtd. for del. 'ed'
95.21/94.7-8 Aunt Helena—poor Miss Parry!] 'Miss Parry' insrtd. for del. 'old lady'
128.12/127.15 mother;] 'she lied;' insrtd. aft. semicolon
128.21/127.24 men called Smith;] 'called Smith' insrtd. bef. semicolon
129.16/128.21 Pole,] comma added beside del. semicolon
129.25/129.3 time,] comma (?) insrtd.
132.15-16/131.20 him;] followed by del. 'he could not combine things'
134.8/133.12 who married and] 'married &' insrtd. with caret aft. 'who'
141.10/140.18 Rezia had gone shopping] 'gone shopping' insrtd. aft. del. 'left'
141.24/141.6 room.] followed by insrtd. 'she' (later del.)
141.27/141.9 already.] 'she said, arranging the roses' insrtd.; period not del.
149.5/148.19 then . . . Bradshaw] 'Holmes & Bradshaw' insrtd. aft. del. 'his torturers'
149.22/149.10 Trust] insrtd. for del. 'Leave'
154.16/154.7-8 If . . . support] 'him' insrtd. without caret; probably intended to read 'If they failed him'
155.3-4/154.21-22 But . . . man] 'But Rezia Warren Smith cried, walking down Harley Street that she did not like that man' insrtd. in bottom margin for del. 'But Rezia Warren Smith cried out, walking Harley Street, that she had been deserted.'
175.4/175.9 miracle] followed by del. semicolon (del. in pencil with del. symbol in margin)

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184.10-11/184.17 woman . . . understand] 'could' insrtd. in pencil aft. 'woman'; final 'and' insrtd. in pencil for del. 'ood'
198.12-13/198.24-25 Kilman . . . small.] 'made one feel so small.' insrtd. for del. 'was quite different from any one she knew.'
200.9-10/200.23-24 people . . . more] 'she said' insrtd. bef. 'more' ('much' del.); quot. mrks. omitted
201.2/201.17-18 Beauty . . . 1gone] 'youth,' del. aft. 'Beauty,'; 'Youth had gone.' insrtd. without caret
220.11-12/221.11-12 up;] followed by 'first one thing, then another, she built it up, sewing.' insrtd. for del. 'the house, the frail card house.'
221.16-17/222.17 And . . . 2him] 'She too could help him.' insrtd. aft. undel. 'And she could say anything to him.'
224.15/225.16 him . . . up] 'coming up' insrtd. aft. 'him.' with guideline over final period
225.1-17/226.2-24 See transcription in Appendix II.
248.17/250.23 2how] 'h' alt. fr. 'H'
271.2-3/273.21-22 Parry . . . . lady!] 'Wonderful old lady!' moved with caret from beginning of next paragraph
271.3/273.23 Lady Bruton] insrtd. for del. 'She'
271.22/274.16 Milly] 'i' over 'o'
276.20-21/279.17-18 Oh . . . party] 'death' del. aft. 'Oh'; comma added for del. period aft. 'Clarissa'; 'i' ab. del. 'I'; 'my' insrtd. for del. 'her'
277.27/280.25 This . . . . Death] 'This he had preserved.' insrtd. bef. 'Death'
278.3/281.2 draws] Proofpage read 'drew'; 'a' ab. 'e'; final 's' added
278.4/281.3 fades] Proofpage read 'faded'; final 's' over 'd'
278.4/281.3 one is] 'is' interl. ab. del. 'was'
278.7-10/281.6-8 "If . . . white.] 'That evening coming downstairs to Sally,' del. bef. '"If'; 'she had said to herself,' moved with guideline aft. 'happy."' [period not del.]; 'once coming down in white' insrtd. aft. 'herself' [comma omitted aft. 'once']
278.16/281.13-14 outrage . . . forcing] 'he would' del. bef. 'forcing' (final 'ing' ab. del. 'e')
278.25/281.23 end . . . incapacity;] 'to be walked with serenely' insrtd. aft. 'end' (no comma added); 'one's overwhelming incapacity;' not del.
278.27/281.24 an] 'an' interl. ab. del. 'that'
279.2/282.1 revive] followed by del. dash (no comma added)
279.2/282.1 1that] 'insolence that levity that' insrtd. aft. 'that'
279.6-9/282.5 disgrace.] followed by del. 'Was he married? Had he left a wife to go on, to face the Bradshaws (how much they stood for!) alone?'
279.14/282.10 success,—] comma over del. period; dash insrtd.
279.28/282.23-24 sleep. . . . window.] 'She walked to the window.' insrtd. aft. 'sleep.'
280.9-10/283.7 quickly. . . . tapering] 'by' insrtd. aft. 'quickly' (final period not del.); 'There were' del. bef. 'tapering'
281.6/284.4 room.] Horizontal line drawn across proofpage below line 6; 'space' written in rt. margin as direction to printer to leave line 7 blank
290.21/293.26-294.1 women . . . her] 'would never give' insrtd. for del. 'never gave'