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Section VII (99.9-(125.26); A1 97.19-* 124.26)
As the narrative point of view shifts from Peter's to Lucrezia Warren Smith's, Woolf marked a structural break at Apr 99.8/9, neglecting to make the same change for Raverat. Although no changes occur in this section of R, she did emend twenty-five passages in Apr, where we find revises in punctuation (14), simple deletions (5), insertions (6), and substitutions (9). These include six significant alterations on page 103 alone, none of which appear in R. This evidence suggests that most of these revises belong to Type V. (A collation of this section in E1 and A1 reveals 37 punctuation variants in passages where A1 agrees with Apr and with R. Since these represent additions to or deletions from the already set British proofs, they must have been made on a subsequent reading of the Hogarth proofset.)
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