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The Bothie of Toper-na-fuosich
The Bothie of Toper-na-Fuosich was first published in
November, 1848.
Written in
hexameters after Longfellow's taming of "our
forward-rushing,
consonant-crushing,
Anglo-savage enunciation" in Evangeline (1847), the
poem recounts
a student reading
party in Scotland.
Philip falls in love with a peasant girl, Elspie, but unable to find a place in English society, "they rounded the globe to New Zealand."
English critics generally ridiculed the poem. Unsigned reviews in the Spectator and the Literary Gazette perhaps reflected a philistine resentment of Oxonians: "at first view The Bothie of Toper-na-Fuosich looked like some Oxford satire; but if it does cover any occult meaning, it is confined to the initiated" (Spectator, 2 December 1848). More sophisticated readers—among them W. M. Thackeray, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, and Charles Kingsley—praised the poem, but the most enthusiastic reception came from the United States. In his critique for the Massachusetts Quarterly Review (March 1849), Emerson declared that "the poem has great literary merits . . . . The Homeric iteration has a singular charm . . . and there is a wealth of expression, a power of description and of portrait-painting, which excels out best romancers."
Matthew Arnold, perhaps Clough's closest friend, initially derided the poem for sounding "more American than English," but tempered his criticism to concede in 1861 that Clough's "composition produces a sense in the reader which Homer's composition produces."
Of his review in The Germ,William Michael Rossetti wrote in the preface of the 1901 reprint: "The only remark which I need make on this somewhat ponderous article is that I, as editor of The Germ, was more or less expected to do the sort of work for which other 'proprietors' had little inclination." Yet he did report that, in response to the review, "I had a letter from Clough, conveying his thanks to me for the copy of The Germ, and the criticism" (PRB Journal, 27 January 1850).
Arthur Hugh Clough
Clough (1819-1861), the son of a Liverpool cotton merchant,
was Dr.
Thomas Arnold's prize pupil at Rugby. He became a scholar
at Balliol
College, where he took a second and told Dr. Arnold in June
1841 "I have
failed." He became a fellow of Oriel, but resigned. Then he
was made principal of University Hall, London, as an
examiner in the
examination office, but
was eventually forced to resign there as well. Clough was
continually
plagued by doubts religious and otherwise, particularly when
his experience
at Oxford challenged his indoctrination at Rugby. The
poetry published
during his lifetime, "The Bothie" and Ambarvalia, was
for the most
part poorly received in England. With this in mind he
published his
epistolary Amours de Voyage in the United States
only. (It appeared
anonymously in the Atlantic Monthly, 1858). He died
in Florence,
and Matthew Arnold wrote "Thyrsis" to commemorate his death.
(in English, 'the hut of the bearded
well')
In September 1847 Clough stayed at the Bothie of Tobair
na Feosag, a
forester's cottage about six miles from the head of Loch
Ericht, on the west
shore of Scotland. Clough was told by the boatman on Loch
Ericht that the
name was really "Toper-na-Fuosich," meaning "the baird's
well." While
William Michael Rossetti's translation of "the bearded well"
refers to Tobair
na Feosag, Clough's title is actually a bawdy Gaelic toast.
A reviewer in the
Literary Gazette for 18 August 1849, quipped that
"the author ought
to have been more guarded against the malicious Gael who
imposed it on the
inquisitive Sassenach." Soon afterward, Clough discovered
his error and
wrote to William Allingham in 1855, that "I was so disgusted
with the
mishap of the name, that I have never had pleasure in [the
poem] since." To
fit the meter he experimented with "The Bothie of
Toper-na-Kippoch" and
later, "The Bothie of Tober-na-Vuolich," a change he
registered throughout
the poem's 1862 edition. Clough had also tried
"Tober-navohlich" and
"Topernafasach," finally deciding that only "The Bothie"
should appear on
the title page.
Ambarvalia
A joint publication with Thomas Burbidge, Ambarvalia
is a
collection of thirty-two short lyrics and blank-verse
fragments which
appeared in January 1849. It was often referred to in
Clough's letters as the
Sicilian Shepherd. Contemporary critics tended to
prefer Burbidge's
contributions to Clough's, generally citing the obscurity of
the latter as the
reason.
Thomas Burbidge
As William Michael Rossetti's review indicates, this
now-forgotten poet
is perhaps best known for his collaboration with Clough on
Ambarvalia. Burbidge (1816-1892) was Clough's
schoolfellow at
Rugby, which he attended 1830-1834. His mischievousness
attracted the
lifelong friendship of Clough, who in adulthood would
regularly send him
drafts of poems. When Burbidge left for Trinity College,
Cambridge (where
he took his BA in 1841) Clough would often arrange to meet
him at Rugby.
After taking his LL.D, Burbidge was made headmaster at
Leamington
College 1851-1857, after which he became Chaplain at Malta,
and later,
Palermo.
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