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Thomas Love Peacock's Manuscript
"Poems" of
1804
by
Nicholas A. Joukovsky
Thomas Love Peacock began writing poetry as a schoolboy at Englefield Green, submitted a prize-winning poem to a juvenile magazine as a fourteen-year-old clerk in the City of London, and published his first volume of poetry in November or December 1805, shortly after his twentieth birthday.[1] Although most reviewers treated Palmyra, and Other Poems indulgently, the volume was a financial failure, and Peacock later dismissed it as "a very juvenile production."[2] When he published a combined "Second Edition" of The Genius of the Thames, Palmyra, and Other Poems in 1812, he included only the two longest poems from his first volume, and even these were heavily revised. On 11 November 1811, he remarked in a letter to his friend Thomas Forster: "Ballantyne is printing a second edition of the Genius of the Thames, Palmyra, and Fiolfar, together with an Inscription for a mountain-dell, being its first appearance on any stage. Palmyra is quite a new thing, about half as long as before, and containing little more than a fifth of the original lines. The King of Norway too stalks forth in a new suit of armour. All my other poems I consign to the tomb of the Capulets."[3] If nearly all his earliest published poems were thus consigned to oblivion, it is hardly surprising that the same fate should have overtaken Peacock's unpublished juvenilia, the bulk of which remained wholly unknown until the 1920s, when two important manuscript collections came to light. Unfortunately, only one of these sources was available for inclusion in the standard Halliford edition of Peacock's Works, which was in progress from 1924 to 1934.
The first of these manuscript collections was appended to a copy of the first edition of Palmyra, and Other Poems in a contemporary calf binding, purchased by Michael Sadleir from a "country bookseller" in August 1923 and now in the Robert H. Taylor Collection of the Princeton University Library. Bound at the back of this volume are 104 extra leaves, the first thirty-seven of which contain transcripts of twenty-three "Additional Poems | by | Thomas Love Peacock | Chiefly written at an | early age"—all dated in a list
The Berg MS is a large quarto manuscript book entitled "Poems, | by | T. L. Peacock." The entire volume consists of seventy-eight leaves measuring 11 5/8 inches by 9 3/16 inches, bound in full diced calf, with gilt tooling, gilt edges, and marbled endpapers. The title "POEMS" is stamped in gilt on the spine. Peacock's original manuscript evidently consisted of sixty-eight leaves of wove paper containing the watermark "John Hays | 1803". To these the binder added ten leaves of laid paper (five at the beginning and five at the end) with the watermark "Russell & Edmeads | 1799". The recto of the second leaf of wove paper contains the title, followed by an epigraph from Martial. The first and third leaves of wove paper are blank, as is the verso of the title leaf. The text of the twenty-eight poems is written in Peacock's neat copperplate hand on both sides of the next forty-one leaves, which are paginated from 1 to 82. Each poem begins on a new page, and each is dated at the end. The handwriting resembles that of Peacock's fair copy of his contemporaneous verse drama "The Circle of Loda," which is also written on
The subsequent history of the volume is obscure. Almost the only thing that can be concluded with certainty is that the Berg MS was not available to the copyist of the Sadleir-Taylor MS. A pair of brief penciled notes on pages 34 and 35 appear to have been added by someone familiar with the neighborhood of Chertsey, for one of them identifies the subject of Peacock's poem "On the Death of Mr Pembroke" as the father of the Rev. Charles Pembroke, who became Rector of Weybridge and Curate of Chertsey in 1827 and died around 1847.[8] Some time after 1847, an unidentified antiquary used eleven blank leaves at the end of the book—turning it upside down and beginning from the back on the third binder's leaf—for a manuscript index to Michel-Ange de La Chausse's Romanum Museum, sive Thesaurus Eruditae Antiquitatis, originally published in 1690, followed by transcriptions of the title pages of two books: an edition of Tasso's Aminta published at Oxford in 1726 and the second edition of Thomas Forster's Original Letters of John Locke, Alg. Sidney, and Lord Shaftesbury, privately printed in London in 1847. The handwriting—or rather hand printing—of this second set of additions is very different from that of the penciled notes; it does not appear to be Forster's, and it is certainly not Peacock's.
While the strict chronological arrangement of the poems makes it seem most unlikely that the Berg MS was prepared with a view to publication, it would appear that the volume was intended as a more or less comprehensive collection of the poems that Peacock thought worthy of circulation and preservation in September or October 1804. Its contents include two-thirds of the poems he is known to have written during the period that it covers, and most of the omissions are relatively easy to explain. The "Answer to the Question, 'Is History or Biography the More Improving Study?'" was a mere exercise, and in any case it had been published in The Monthly Preceptor, or Juvenile Library for February 1800. The two "Epigrams" (January 1801) might have been rejected as too trifling, the verse letter "Liberty" (January 1801) as too full of personified abstractions or too politically outspoken, the verse letter to his grandfather Love (11 August 1801) as too topical or too crudely patriotic, and the fragment "From the Revelations" (? 1801) as too enthusiastic—if, indeed, they were not simply deemed inferior work. More personal considerations are likely to have influenced the omission of all eight of the poems that may be associated with Lucretia Oldham, "the beauty of Shacklewell Green," with whom Peacock appears to have been in love at
The twenty-eight poems that Peacock included in the Berg MS contain almost nine hundred lines of verse in a variety of genres as well as a variety of metrical and stanzaic forms. Perhaps the most noteworthy aspect of the collection is the high proportion of satirical and humorous pieces—about a third of the total number, including most of the longer poems. In this respect, the Berg MS contrasts sharply with the Palmyra volume, in which the only two humorous pieces are relegated to a section of "Nugæ" at the end. Although the presence of three imitations of Ossian should not surprise anyone who has read Byron's Hours of Idleness, it is surprising to find no imitations or translations of the classics—which may be a sign of diffidence in the young self-educated scholar. Of the four new poems, the earliest—a schoolboy effusion entitled "Midsummer Holidays. | Written at twelve years of age."—is the most revealing, for it is the only poem Peacock is known to have written between the ages of nine and fourteen. Apart from this specimen of very early work, all the poems were written between his fifteenth and nineteenth birthdays.
As an independent collection in which the poems are chronologically arranged and carefully dated, the Berg MS is the only contemporary document that allows us to trace the development of Peacock's versification. Each poem is dated at the end, at least with the month and year, but in seven cases with the day of the month as well. Since more than half its dates are not recorded elsewhere, the Berg MS makes an important contribution to the chronology of Peacock's early work. For eleven of the poems the Berg MS confirms the dating of the Sadleir-Taylor MS or some other source, and for two more its dating differs only slightly from that of other manuscripts. On the other hand, for fourteen of the poems the Berg MS provides the only available evidence, or in two cases the only precise evidence, for dating. It also gives the correct date for "Peace," which is obviously misdated in the Sadleir-Taylor MS.[10] Perhaps the most important contribution of the Berg MS to the chronology of Peacock's verse is its establishment of early dates for seven of the eight poems that he later included in Palmyra, and Other Poems. With the exception of "To a Young Lady Netting," which is dated October 1803 in a separate manuscript in the Pforzheimer Collection,[11] the remaining poems in the Palmyra volume are all likely to have been written between October 1804 and October 1805, after the completion of the Berg MS.
The dating of two of the latest poems in the Berg MS also has significant
The appearance of "The Monks of St Mark" in the Berg MS plays an important part in a more complex argument for redating the rare private printing of that poem.[13] The octavo half-sheet containing The Monks of St. Mark has always been dated 1804 because at the end the poem is dated September 1804. But Peacock often dated his manuscript poems in this manner, and the Berg MS confirms that September 1804 was the date of composition—not necessarily the date of printing. Indeed, if Peacock had printed the poem at that time, it is unlikely that he would have taken the trouble to copy it into the Berg MS. Moreover, the fact that The Monks of St. Mark was printed by Thomas Bensley, the printer of the Palmyra volume, in the same typographical style, on the same size paper, with the same font of type, the same measure, the same page length, and the same kind of headline strongly suggests that The Monks of St. Mark was printed at the same time as Palmyra, in the autumn of 1805. Since the typographical similarities are too striking to be a matter of coincidence, there would appear to be three possible ways to account for the relationship between the two works. (1) The Monks could have been set in type as a specimen of the typographical style to be employed in the Palmyra volume. (2) The Monks could have been originally intended for inclusion in the Palmyra volume but removed from the book after the poem had been set in type. (3) The Monks could have been deliberately printed in the same style as the Palmyra volume, either while the volume was being printed or shortly thereafter. The third supposition seems somewhat less plausible than the others, mainly because the lack of a separate title page, with the consequent odd placement of the printer's imprint at the bottom of the first page of text, suggests that The Monks of St. Mark was not planned as a separately printed work.
In addition to the texts of four wholly or partially unpublished poems, the Berg MS provides substantive variants in the text, title, or epigraph of all but one of the twenty-four previously published pieces. For the eight
At least a few of the dozen variant titles throw some kind of new light on the poems in question, most notably the subtitle identifying "The Monks of St Mark" as "A Tale of Wonder." But perhaps the most interesting additions to the existing text are thirteen otherwise unrecorded epigraphs. Taken as a group, these new epigraphs not only reflect Peacock's literary taste but also suggest that the range of his early reading may have been more limited than has often been thought. Of the nine new Latin epigraphs, six are from the first book of Horace's Odes, while two more are from Virgil's Eclogues (the other one is an anonymous tag). The only Greek epigraph is from the Anacreontea, the two Italian ones are from Ariosto and Metastasio, and the only English one is from Pope. Since most of the poems in the Berg MS survive in other manuscript or printed versions, it is surely surprising that only two of its fifteen epigraphs appear elsewhere: the passage from Juvenal that introduces "Levi Moses" in the Palmyra volume and the line from Il Pastor Fido that identifies the source of the "Translation from the Italian of Guarini" in the 1875 edition of Peacock's Works. The Palmyra volume is, to be sure, somewhat more sparing than the Berg MS in its use of epigraphs, but the omission of all epigraphs from the Sadleir-Taylor MS suggests that the copyist simply ignored them—either because she did not consider them important or because she did not know Latin or Italian. Even if many of the new epigraphs are more decorative than functional, they clearly testify to the care with which Peacock prepared the Berg MS.
Since it would be impractical to reproduce the entire text of the Berg MS, I instead provide a poem-by-poem description of its contents, including a detailed collation of the previously published poems with the texts in Volumes 6 and 7 of the Halliford edition of Peacock's Works. The entry for each
Contents of the Manuscript
General title: "Poems, | by | T. L. Peacock." Epigraph (below title): "Nos hæc novimus esse nihil. | Mart:" [Epigrams, XIII.ii.8: "I know these things to be worthless"]. John Cam Hobhouse, who became one of the closest friends of Peacock's later years, used the same epigraph on the title page of his Imitations and Translations from the Ancient and Modern Classics, Together with Original Poems Never Before Published (1809). Both Peacock and Hobhouse would have expected their readers to remember that the passage in Martial continues for two more lines: "non tamen hoc nimium nihil est, si candidus aure | nec matutina si mihi fronte venis" ("and yet they are not absolutely worthless, if you come to me with a just ear, and not with an early morning frown").
- (1) "Midsummer Holidays. | Written at twelve years of
age."—pp. 1-2. Date: "June 1798." Previously unpublished.
The happy day at last is come,
We're ready all to hasten home,
We all in uproar are:
French Greek and Latin! all adieu!
We now no more remember you.
We fly away from care.
The boxes bring: the stage is here:
To London now our course we steer,
Devoid of grief and sorrow;
We think not of our future fate,
But joyfully anticipate203
Where we shall be tomorrow.
When now at last arriv'd in town,
Deliver'd from the master's frown,
We haste to meet our friends;
No more we cry, no more we fret;
We seem entirely to forget,
That holidays have ends.
-
(2) "The Lord's Prayer, | Paraphrased."—pp. 3-4. Epigraph: "Deo optimo maximo." ["To God the best and greatest"]. Date: "January 1801." Published with "A. Æ. 16." following the title (without epigraph or date) in Palmyra, pp. 106-107. Collated with Works, 6:70.
13-14 Permit not in temptation's road | Our heedless steps to stray;] Oh, keep us from temptation's road, | Lest we should run astray:
Not capitalized: "heav'n" (6). Leigh Hunt used the same Latin tag—in the abbreviated form "Deo Opt. Max."—as the epigraph to his hymn "To the Omnipotent God" in Juvenilia (1801), pp. 135-136.
- (3) "The Man of Fashion."—pp. 5-6. Epigraph: ". . .
gracilis
puer, | Perfusus liquidis odoribus . . ." [Horace, Odes,
I.v.1-2,
with omissions: "a slender youth, bedewed with liquid perfumes"]. Date:
"June 1801". Transcript (without epigraph but with the same date) in the
Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 17-18. Collated with Works, 7:162,
466.
5 his knee] the kneeNot capitalized: "chap" (1), "cape" (3), "boots" (5), "gala" (11). Not underlined: "cheats" (8), "modern Man" (16). Not hyphenated: "tomorrow" (10).
11 only fit] always fit
13-14 The order of these two lines is reversed.
- (4) "Sir Peter Bohea. | In a letter to a friend."—pp. 7-12.
Date:
"June 16: 1801." MS letter addressed "Mrs Love
Senr, | Chertsey,
| Surry." and dated "London July 16—1801—" in the Berg
Collection.
Transcript titled "Sir Peter Bohea | in a letter to a friend—" and
dated
"London | June 16. 1801." in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 50-57. Transcript
of original letter by Harriet Love in the Pforzheimer Collection:
Shelley and His Circle, 1:277-285. Collated with
Works, 7:163-166, 466-467.
Dear Grandmother,] Dear . . . ,
7 knaves] rogues
8 asses-head] ass's head
46 such grace] more grace
Capitalized: "Alley" (47). Not capitalized: "modesty" (11), "cocknies" (26, 64), "alderman" (56, 57), "square" (70). Underlined: "quite" (11), "improv'd" (23), "worshipful" (24), "experienc'd" (29), "ward" (34), "villanous city" (66), "West" (68), "sweet" (70), "figures away" [no quotation marks] (86), "figure away" [no quotation marks] (88). Not underlined: "valiantly" (31), "fam'd dad" (33), "great" (34), "extinguish" (38), "damn'd farthing rushlight!" (42), "sweet" (46), "Wick" (54), "Bohea" (54), "Lord's Anointed" (58), "knighted" (60), "Peter" (61), "moderate" (62), "dear, pretty wife" (82), "affectionate" (83), "life-loving" (85), "to make both ends meet" [no quotation marks] (87), "in the Fleet" (88). Hyphenated: "Twopence-farthing's" (27), "Candlewick-ward" (34), "Grosvenor-square" (70). Not hyphenated: "tallow chandler" (34). Elided: "distress'd" (67). Not apostrophized: "twas" (42). Spelling: "pennyless" (4), "cocknies" (26, 64), "villanous" (66). Exclamation points after "Gad's curse!" and "Gad demme!" (77). New paragraph after line 60. Two blank lines between paragraphs. It is not clear whether this verse letter was written a month before it was sent to Peacock's grandmother, or whether the 16 June date in the Berg and Sadleir-Taylor MSS is a slip for 16 July taken over from earlier MSS. The text of the Berg MS is much closer to that of the letter than to that of the Sadleir-Taylor MS, which contains a number of corrupt readings and appears to have been based on an early version or rough draft.204 - (5) "On the death of | Sir Ralph Abercromby."—pp. 13-14.
Epigraph: "Semper honos, nomenque tuum, laudesque manebunt. | Virg:"
[Eclogues, v.78: "Always thy honor and name and glories
shall
abide"]. Date: "June 1801". Transcript by Harriet Love (without epigraph
or date) in the Pforzheimer Collection: Shelley and His
Circle,
1:251-253. Collated with Works, 7:171, 468.
5 heart] breastNot capitalized: "chief" (1), "angels" (3), "fame" (14). The concluding quotation—"The deeds of days of other years!"—is from the opening of "Carthon: A Poem" in James Macpherson's Ossian, ed. Otto L. Jiriczek, 3 vols. (Heidelberg, 1940), 1:127, 128. General Sir Ralph Abercromby, the commander of British troops in the Mediterranean, died on 28 March 1801, as a result of a wound he received a week earlier in the campaign against Alexandria that followed his successful landing in force at Aboukir Bay on 8 March.
- (6) "The Storm."—pp. 15-18. Epigraph: "Permitte divis
cætera, qui simul | Stravêre ventos æquore fervido |
Deprœliantes, nec cupressi, | Nec veteres agitantur orni. | HOR:"
[Odes, I.ix.9-12: "Leave the rest to the gods, for as soon as
they have stilled the winds battling on the stormy sea, neither the cypresses
nor the ancient ashtrees are shaken"]. Date: "October 1801." Transcript
(without epigraph but with the same date) in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp.
2-6. Collated with Works, 7:168-170, 467-468.
2 loudly] fiercelyCapitalized: "Pleasure's" (40). Not capitalized: "hermit" (9, 19, 31), "whirlwind's" (10), "man" (19), "goal" (22), "west" (26), "sun" (26, 40). Elided: "tow'r" (20), "flow'rs" (28), "ev'ning" (35). Not contracted: "though" (37). Apostrophized: "it's" (11, 17, 39). Ellipsis points at the end of line 24 and at the beginning of line 25.
14 blue-forked] sulph'rous
22 he gain] he gains
34 The fields] These fields
- (7) "Foldath. | Imitated from a little poem in Macpherson's notes
on Ossian."—pp. 19-20. Date: "October 1801." Published as
"Foldath in
the Cavern of Moma. From the Same" (without date) in
Palmyra, pp. 122-123, where it follows "Clonar and
Tlamín" (no. 25, below). Collated with Works, 6:78.
20510 while] whilstNot capitalized: "reflected beam" (11). Peacock's source is the note to Temora: An Epic Poem, Book V, beginning "The fall of Foldath . . ." (Ossian, ed. Jiriczek, 2: 93-94).
- (8) "Peace."—pp. 21-23. Epigraph: "Cara Deum soboles,
magnum Jovis incrementum! | Aspice convexo nutantem pondere mundum,
| Terrasque, tractusque maris, cælumque profundum; | Aspice, venturo
lætentur ut omnia sæclo. | Virg:" [Eclogues, iv.49-52:
"Dear child of the Gods, great offspring of Jove! behold the world with its
massive dome vibrating, and the lands and the expanse of sea and the
unfathomable sky; behold how all things rejoice in the age that is to be!"].
Date: "October 1801." Transcript (without epigraph) misdated January 1801
in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 14-15. Collated with Works,
7:161-162, 465-466.
25 long-wish'd-for] all-cheeringCapitalized: "Faction" (29). Not capitalized: "harpies" (3), "earth" (5), "suns" (19), "isle" (26), "prejudice" (28). Not underlined: "Liberty" (23), "Plenty" (23). Elided: "fled'st" (6), 'giv'n" (17), "Heav'n" (18), "Pow'r" (25), "suff'ring" (26). Spelling: "Oh" (12). On historical grounds, H. F. B. Brett-Smith recognized that the January 1801 date in the Sadleir-Taylor MS was too early and suggested that it was an error for January 1802—Works, l:xxviii, note. However, the October 1801 date in the Berg MS is certainly correct, for preliminary articles of peace were signed in London on 1 October 1801, leading eventually to the Treaty of Amiens on 27 March 1802.
- (9) "The Alarmists. | In a letter to a friend."—pp. 24-29.
Date:
"Decr 25: 1801." Transcript titled "The Alarmists | part
of a Letter to
a friend | Decr 25 1801—" in the Sadleir-Taylor
MS, pp. 58-65.
Collated with Works, 7:172-175, 468-469.
7 mighty] weightyCapitalized: "Sir" (20), "Fate" (42). Not capitalized: "peace" (4), "clubs" (5), "club" (8), "auctioneer" (12), "peace" (14, 20, 31, 35, 59, 65), "nation" (16, 64), "cobler" (19), "tailor" (28), "poulterer" (43), "oilman" (45), "cook" (49), "in" (49), "premier" (57), "devils" (59), "zounds" (63), "ministers" (65, 73), "chairman" (69). Underlined: "shameful, iniquitous peace" (4), "learned" (10), "lot" (14), "knock'd down" (16), "wax" (21), "melts away" (21), "tapp'd on the heel" (23), "pegging awls" (24), "in holes" (25), "last" (26), "soles" (26), "worn" (32), "bare" (32), "ready cut" (33), "cabbag'd" (34), "patch'd up" (35), "they" (35), "taken" (36), "measure" (36), "shred" (38), "cloth" (38), "needle" (39), "crack of a nit" (40), "pucker" (41), "choler" (41), "threads" (42), "clipp'd off" (42), "duck" (43), "foul" (44), "goose" (44), "flask" (46), "ooz'd out" (46), "oil" (46), "pickle" (48), "mess" (51), "smoke" (51), "rare" (52), "pot" (53), "sauce" (54), "stew" (54), "trifle" (55), "quake" [? unintentionally underlined
23 goodness] greatness
25 Leather] leathers
27 the polish'd] this polish'd
34 nipp'd off] snipp'd off
36 say they have] say they've
37 shreds] sheers
44 would bear] could bear
49 bawl'd a stout] bawl'd out a
52 Bony part] Bonypart
68 curse me, 'tis] damme! it's
69 forbids me] forbids us
71 a fortnight's time] a little time
75 in all their] in their
78 So, my friends, let us all be] So let's all, my good friends, be
instead of "jelly"] (55), "Mounseer" (56), "roast beef" (56), "sop" (57), "suck'd up" (57), "cake" (58), "puff" (58), "sweets" (59), "devils" (59), "taste" (59), "baste" (60), "fat" (61), "over-done" (62), "done over" (62), "roasted" (63), "dish'd" (63), "broil" (63), "gravy" (64), "starve" (66), "feed" (66), "fat of the land" (66), "bubble-and-squeak" (68), "important" (70). Hyphenated: "a-going! a-going! ! a-going! ! !" (18), "ready-cut" [? underlining unintentionally omitted] (33), "over-done" (62), "bubble-and-squeak" (68). Elided: "conven'd" (8), "cabbag'd" (34), "patch'd" (35), "liv'd" (61). Not contracted: "Although" (39), "Though" (15, 47). Spelling: "woeful" (3), "villanous" (14), "shewing" (17). New paragraphs after lines 30 and 68. Two blank lines between paragraphs. The Berg MS reveals a number of textual corruptions in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, which may have been copied from an early version or rough draft.206 - (10) "From the seventeenth chapter of Isaiah."—pp. 30-31. Date: "May 24: 1802." Transcript titled "Paraphrase from the 17 Chapr Isaiah | May 24, 1802." in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 12-13. Collated with Works, 7:175-176, 469. Not capitalized: "tempest" (3), "ocean" (3), "nations" (4), "world" (11), "eternal" (18). Hyphenated: "madly-rushing" (2), "long-resounding" (6), "loudly-eddying" (8), "thistle-down" (16). Elided: "pow'rful" (9), "driv'n" (19). Apostrophized: "it's" (6). Comma after "great" (18). Stanza break after line 6, and possibly after line 12 (where a page break occurs). Peacock's paraphrase is based on the Authorized Version of Isaiah 17:12-13, which he later quoted in a note to Palmyra, pp. 43-44.
- (11) "Mira's Tomb."—pp. 32-34. Epigraph: "Vitæ
summa
brevis spem nos vetat inchoare longam. | Hor:" [Odes,
I.iv.15:
"Life's brief span forbids us to form distant hopes"]. Date: "May 26:
1802.—" Published as "Mira" (without epigraph or date) in
Palmyra, pp. 112-114. Collated with Works,
6:73.
5 ev'ning-close] ev'ning hoursNot hyphenated: "tomorrow" (24). The last two lines are annotated in pencil in an unknown hand: "Such as they are to day, | Such we, alas! may be tomorrow. | (Prior's Garland)" [Matthew Prior, "The Garland," 37-38: "Such as She is, who dy'd to Day; | Such I, alas! may be to Morrow"].
6 softly-mournful] sweetly-mournful
7 The earth its earliest sweets bestows] The red-breast scatters fragrant flow'rs
9 Summer's brightest flow'rs] Spring's first op'ning sweets
- (12) "On the death of Mr Pembroke."—pp. 35-36. Epigraph: "Quis desiderio sit pudor, aut modus, | Tam cari capitis? . . . Hor:" [Odes, I.xxiv.1-2: "What restraint, or limit, should there be to our grief for so dear a person?"]. Date: "Octr 1802." Published as "On the Death of Charles Pembroke, Esq." (without epigraph or date) in Palmyra, pp. 101-102. Collated with Works, 6:67. Not capitalized: "friendship" (2), "virtue" (5, 18). Hyphenated: "soft-eyed" (6). Spelling: "honor'd" (7). Within quotation marks, but not underlined: "Like Autumn's leaves the present race decays, | Another race succeeds." (16-17). I have not identified this quotation, which is strongly reminiscent of Homer, Iliad, vi.146-149. After the title, Mr. Pembroke is identified in pencil in an unknown hand: "(of Chertsey) | (Father of the Rev. Charles Pembroke)". An obituary notice in the Gentleman's Magazine for October 1802 indicates that "Charles Pembroke, esq. attorney at law" died on 25 September 1802, at Chertsey, "in his 45th year" (72:979). Peacock's change of title may have been prompted by Mrs. Sewell's poem "On the Death of Charles Pembroke, Esq. of Chertsey. 1802," published in her Poems, pp. 247-248 (see no. 16, below).
- (13) "Slender's Love-Elegy."—pp. 37-39. Epigraph:
Xαλεòν Τò —ὴ
øιλῆσαι, |
Xαλεòν δέ Καί øιλῆσαι, |
XαλεπΤερον
δέ
iáνΤων |
AiοΤυγχáνειν
øιλοῦνΤα. | ANAKPEΩN.
[Anacreontea, 27B (Bergk) or 29 (Edmonds): 1-4: "It is
painful
not
to love, and also painful to love, but it is most painful of all to be unsuccessful in love"]. Date: "Jany 30: 1803." Published (without epigraph or date) in Palmyra, pp. 137-139. Collated with Works, 6:90-91. Elided: "am'rous" (36). Spelling: "splendour" (17). Quotation marks around the refrain in lines 16, 32, and 40. The refrain is, of course, from The Merry Wives of Windsor, III.i.70 and 114. However, Peacock's poem also owes something to William Shenstone's "Slender's Ghost," with its similar refrain, "O sweet! O sweet Anne Page!"—The Works in Verse and Prose of William Shenstone, Esq., 2 vols. (1764), 1:216-217.207
- (14) "Translation | From the Italian of Guarini."—pp. 40-41. Epigraph: "O Primavera, gioventù del anno! . . . &c.—" [Il Pastor Fido, III.i.l: "O Spring, youth of the year!"]. Date: "Jany 31: 1803.—". Transcript (without epigraph or date) in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 37-38. Published from an unlocated MS dated 1 February 1803 (with the epigraph) in The Works of Thomas Love Peacock, ed. Henry Cole, 3 vols. (1875), 3:2. Collated with Works, 7:177, 470. Capitalized: "Spring" (1, 9), "Winter's" (5), "Nature" (6, 7). This passage from Il Pastor Fido was a set piece, translated by Leigh Hunt as late as 1844—see The Poetical Works of Leigh Hunt, ed. H. S. Milford (1923), p. 466. Peacock translated another passage from Guarini's pastoral drama as "Amarillis; from the Pastor Fido" (IV.v.197-206, 222-224) in Palmyra, pp. 115-117.
- (15) "To a friend at Guernsey."—pp. 42-43. Date: "March
1803—". Previously unpublished.
When hen-peck'd cit, in old scratch wig,The quotations in lines 5 and 19-20 are from A Midsummer Night's Dream, V.i.281, and Love's Labor's Lost. V.ii.901-902 and 910-911 (with "note" for "word"). The village of Shacklewell, near Hackney, was the residence of Lucretia Oldham—"the beauty of Shacklewell Green"—for whom Peacock wrote a number of poems between November 1802 and November 1803. The "friend at Guernsey" was also the addressee of "Letter to a friend" (no. 20, below), which is titled "To a friend at Guernsey" in the Sadleir-Taylor MS. Since he was evidently a member of Peacock's circle of friends
Forsakes tea, sugar, prune, and fig,
And down to Margate hastes, to lave
His greasy carcase in the wave,
With "dainty duck," supremely great,
A lady of amazing weight,
And darling Jacky, hopeful boy!
So pleasant! stow'd on board the hoy; . . .
When dapper cocknies (dext'rous crew!)
Enjoy their Sunday's row to Kew,
And, gliding down the silver stream,
Beneath the cool meridian beam,
Cry, as they tug the oar for pleasure,
"Vell! this is charming beyond measure!"
"How sweet the prospect on each side!
It looks so monstrous countrified!
I loves to see the fields and trees,
And snuff the flagrant rular breeze!" . . .
When Cuckoo sings his "note of fear,
Unpleasing to a married ear;" . . .
When raging Sirius fiercely burns; . . .
In short . . . when Summer's reign returns; . . .
Still on our shores should peace remain,
Then may I see my friend again,
Nor may he quickly bid farewell
To London and to . . . Shacklewell!
in the vicinity of Hackney, I have speculated elsewhere that he may have been William de St. Croix, whose father was born in Jersey—see my "Peacock before Headlong Hall," pp. 13-14.208 - (16) "To Mrs Sewell, | on her poems." —pp. 44-46. Date: "June 1803." Transcript titled "To Mrs. Sewell, on reading her poems." (with the same date) in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 26-28. Collated with Works, 7:179-180, 470. Not capitalized: "muse" (16), "virtue's" (25), "religion" (26). Hyphenated: "regularly-wild" (6), "many-sounding" (14). Elided: "tun'd" (3), "pow'r" (21), "giv'n" (27), "Heav'n" (30). Mary Sewell, née Young, was the author of Poems, by Mrs. G. Sewell, Relict of the Late Geo. Sewell, Rector of Byfleet, Surrey, published at Egham and Chertsey by R. Wetton and Sons in 1803. The list of subscribers includes "Mr. T. L. Peacock" as well as "Lieut. Wm. Love, R.N." (Peacock's uncle) and a "Mrs. Love" (either Peacock's aunt or his grandmother)—pp. xiv, xviii.
- (17) "Nina-thoma. | Imitated from Ossian."—pp. 47-48.
Date:
"July 1803." Transcript titled "Imitated from Ossian (Barrathan)." (with the
same date) in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 29-31. Collated with
Works, 7:180-181, 470-471.
23 to-morrow] the morrowNot capitalized: "king's" (15), "harp's" (17), "virgin" (20). Hyphenated: "Blue-tumbling" (10). Apostrophized: "did'st" (20). No stanza break after line 5. Ellipsis points at the end of line 10 (where a page break occurs). Peacock's source is in Macpherson's "Berrathon: A Poem" (Ossian, ed. Jiriczek, 1:262-263).
- (18) "Levi Moses."—pp. 49-52. Epigraph: "Sed
quò divitias
hæc per tormenta coactas? | Cum furor haud dubius, cum sit manifesta
phrenesis, | Ut locuples moriaris egenti vivere fato? | Juv:"
[Satires, xiv.135-137: "But to what end do you heap up
wealth
by means of these torments, when it is sheer madness, when it is plain
frenzy, to live in want so that you may die rich?"]. Date: "August 1803."
Published (with epigraph but without date) in Palmyra, pp.
133-136. Collated with Works, 6:87-89 (after correcting "my
laborsh" to "ma laborsh" in line 26 on the basis of the text in
Palmyra).
7 bargains two hundred] bargainsh tree hondredNot capitalized: "lane" (3), "fortune" (26). Underlined: "cleverly" (22), "cleverly cheated him" (23). Not underlined: "shent per shent" (31). Not hyphenated: "Roshemary lane" (3). Not elided: "shcraped" (27). Spelling: "Vich" (14), "laboursh" (26). Numerous examples of "Jews' Songs" can be found in The Universal Songster; or, Museum of Mirth, 3 vols. (1825-26).
19 inshtructions] inshtructionsh
20 ma bushinesh] my bushinesh [? unintentionally normalized]
25 mashelf] myshelf [? unintentionally normalized]
33-48 The order of the last two stanzas is reversed.
33, 40 vit] vid
29, 39, 47, 48 goot] good
- 19) "Paddy's Lamentation."—p. 53. Date:
"Augt 1803."
Transcript dated 1803 in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 46-47. Collated with
Works, 7:183-184, 471.
1 shoul's dearest] shoul's darestNot capitalized: "oh" (1), "jewel" (4, 8, 12). Spelling: "whisky" (6). The Berg MS restores the dialect of the comic Irishman, which is almost completely normalized in the Sadleir-Taylor MS.
2 dear joy] best joy
3 my dear] my sweet
4 did ye] did you
5 Oh! my] Ah! my
6 potatoes] porators,209
7 wish and nothing to cry for] wish, you had nothing to sigh for
9 leave] lave
11 dear creature] dare crater [? underlining unintentionally omitted]
- (20) "Jack Allspice. | Imitated from the French."—pp.
54-55.
Date: "Octr 1803." Previously unpublished.
Jack Allspice late in Wapping dwelt,
In coffee, tea, and snuff he dealt,
And all before him carried:
He saw, and lov'd, a blithsome maid,
With joy he found his love repaid,
And little Jack was married.
Three months pass on in love and joy:
The fourth arrives: a chopping boy
To Jacky's arms they bear:
Jack look'd amaz'd: the doctor smil'd:
"Doctor!" says Jack, "this pretty child
Has come too soon, I fear!"
"Friend Jack! amongst the sons of men,
These things will happen now and then,
Repine not thus at fate:
But learn this truth, you silly loon,
The child came not at all too soon,
Your marriage came too late!"
- (21) "Glee."—pp. 56-57. Epigraph: "Nunc est bibendum. | Hor:" [Odes, I.xxxvii.1: "Now it is time to drink"]. Date: "Decr 1803." Transcript (without epigraph but with the same date) in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 32-33. Collated with Works, 7:185-186, 472. Lines 1, 3, 9, and 11 are each divided into two lines of three and four syllables, respectively. Not hyphenated: "tomorrow" (4).
- (22) "Letter to a friend."—pp. 58-60. Date: "Decr 23: 1803—". Transcript titled "To a friend at Guernsey | Decr 23d 1803" in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 66-69. Collated with Works, 7:186-187, 472-473. Not capitalized: "this" (16), "turkies" (17), "season" (20), "bellman's" (22), "christmas" (25), "care" (26), "demons" (27), "aldermanic" (28), "turkey" (28), "muse" (29), "sir" (33), "answer" (34). Underlined: "I" (6), "reason" (19), "aldermanic" (28). Elided: "requir'd" (31), "tir'd" (32), "pr'ythee" (33). Not contracted: "Though" (3, 7), "Through" (23). Apostrophized: "'till" (35). Comma after "absent" (2). The concluding quotation—"Adieu! Adieu! remember me!"—is, of course, from Hamlet, I.v.91 and 111. The addressee was evidently the "friend at Guernsey" to whom Peacock had written no. 15, above.
- (23) "To Matilda."—pp. 61-62. Epigraph: "Che barbaro
addio!
| Che fato crudel! | Che attendono i rei | Dagli astri funesti, | Se i premi
son questi | D'un alma fedel?— | Metastasio."
[Demofoonte,
II.xi.33-38: "What a rude farewell! What a cruel fate! What can the guilty
expect from their fatal stars, if these are the rewards of a faithful soul?"].
Date: "Feby 1804." Holograph MS dated "Feb. 7 1804."
(without
epigraph) in the Pforzheimer Collection: Shelley and His
Circle,
1:332-334. Transcript of an earlier version titled "To Matilda—on
parting
| Jany 24. 1804." (without
epigraph) in the Sadleir-Taylor MS, pp. 34-36. Collated with Works, 7:187-188, 473. Hyphenated: "storm-beaten" (2).210
- (24) "To Rosalia."—pp. 63-64. Epigraph: ". . . Miseri
quibus
| Intentata nites! . . . | Hor:" [Odes, I.v.12-13: "Wretched
they
to whom thou, untried, seemest fair!"]. Date: "Feby
1804." First three
stanzas published (with a different name, with a different epigraph, and
without date) as the opening of the much longer "Farewell to Matilda" in
Palmyra, pp. 108-111. See Works, 6:71-72.
Last
two stanzas previously unpublished.
Rosalia . . . farewell! Fate has doom'd us to part;
But the prospect occasions no pang to my heart;
No longer is love with my reason at strife,
Though once thou wert dearer, far dearer than life.
As together we roam'd, I the passion confess'd,
Which thy beauty and virtue had rais'd in my breast;
That the passion was mutual, thou mad'st me believe,
And I thought my Rosalia could never deceive!
My Rosalia! no! false one! my claims I resign;
Thou can'st not, thou must not, thou shalt not be mine!
I now scorn thee as much as I lov'd thee before,
Nor sigh when I think I shall meet thee no more.
Thou love! no, Rosalia! debase not the name,
Not in bosoms like thine glows so noble a flame;
Thine was felt without pleasure, was lost without sorrow,
Thou could'st love me to-day, and forget me tomorrow!
Thy breast swells with joy at the thought of my pain,
But I mourn not the loss of a heart I disdain,
Though I once thought it death from Rosalia to sever,
With a smile I can leave thee, and leave thee for ever!
- (25) "Clonar and Tlamín. | Imitated from a little poem in
Macpherson's notes on Ossian."—pp. 65-68. Date: "July 1804."
Holograph MS (with the same date) in the Pforzheimer Collection:
Shelley and His Circle, 1:374-377. Published (without date)
in
Palmyra, pp. 118-121. Collated with Works,
6:76-77.
The quotation from Macpherson's note is omitted.Capitalized: "Death's" (31). Elided: "E'en" (11). Apostrophized: "it's" (18), "'Till" (22). Question mark after "streams" (6). No comma after "hill" (13). The name Tlamín is accented in the title and the first heading, but not afterwards. The readings of the Berg MS almost always agree with those of the Pforzheimer MS. Peacock's source—misidentified in Shelley and His Circle—is the note to Temora: An Epic Poem, Book VIII, beginning "Tla-min, mildly soft . . ." (Ossian, ed. Jiriczek, 2:146).
3 wind] breeze
9 the war-tempest] war's stern tempest
14 Ye blue mists of Lutha] Ye mists of the valley
18 While fix'd on the mind] Whilst fix'd on the soul
23 Then why] Oh why
27 Towards green-vallied Erin] Tow'rds Erin's green vallies
- (26) "Ancient War-Song."—p. 69. Date:
"Augt 1804."
Included as the opening "Chorus of Bards" in the undated holograph MS
drama "The Circle of Loda" (written
on paper with an 1801 watermark): British Library Additional MS 36816, fol. 104. Published by A. B. Young in "Unpublished Songs of T. L. Peacock," Notes and Queries, 10th series, 10 (5 December 1908); 442, and in his edition of The Plays of Thomas Love Peacock (1910), pp. 75-76. Collated with Works, 7:293. Not hyphenated: "Dimly seen" (3). Apostrophized: "it's" (10).211
- (27) "The Monks of St Mark. | A Tale of
Wonder."—pp.
70-77. Date: "Septr 1804." Epigraph: "In these deep
solitudes and
awful cells, | . . . | What means this tumult . . .? | Pope."
[Eloisa to Abelard, 1, 4]. Privately printed (without subtitle
or
epigraph, but with the same date) by Thomas Bensley, in the same format
and probably at the same time as Palmyra. Collated with
Works, 7:189-192, 474-475.
15 Or, all] AllCapitalized: "Brother" (34). Not capitalized: "abbot" (17, 25, 61), "brother" (63). Underlined: "held forth" (16), "flock" (17), "feelingly" (25), "heels" (46), "head" (46), "serpentin'd" (66). Not underlined: 'Te Deums" (13), "lend him a hand" (34), "boozing about" (61). Not hyphenated: "corridor stairs" (74). Elided: "begg'd" (34). Not elided: "Bewildered" (67). Apostrophized: "it's" (4, 20), "'Till" (17, 36). Not apostrophized: "Stead" (13). Spelling: "boozing" (61), "vapours" (82). No quotation marks around lines 26-30. The subtitle is helpful in establishing the literary origins of Peacock's poem, which is evidently an experiment in the comic vein of Matthew Gregory Lewis's Tales of Wonder, 2 vols. (1801). Lewis's celebrated collection contains a good deal of humor and self-parody, most notably in his parody of his own "Alonzo the Brave and Fair Imogine" in "Giles Jollop the Grave, and Brown Sally Green" (1:26-30), and in the anonymous parody of "The Erl-King" and "The Cloud King" in "The Cinder King" (2:416-418). The six-line anapestic stanza of The Monks of St. Mark is found in only one poem in Lewis's collection: H. Bunbury's "The Little Grey Man" (1:113-121).
23-24 While Pedro protested, it vex'd him infernally | To see such good beverage taken "externally!"] Whilst Pedro declar'd, "he could pretty well guess, | That a parboil'd calf's foot was a very fine mess!"
consented, but all] complied, but all yet
50 did Pedro] poor Pedro
53-54 And prone on the floor fell this son of the cowl, | And howl'd, deeply-smarting, a terrible howl!] Who, thus stretch'd on the floor, yell'd out ah!s and holloa!s, | As if half a score devils were tweaking his nose!
55 Poor Augustine's bosom with terror was cold] Amaz'd and confounded did Augustine stand
56 his hold] his hand
- (28) "Maria's return to her native cottage."—pp. 78-82.
Epigraph: "Che debbo far, che poss'io far qui sola? | Chi me da ajuto,
oime! chi me consola? | Ariosto." [Orlando Furioso,
X.xxvii.7-8: "What shall I do, what can I do here alone? Who will help
me, alas! who will comfort me?"]. Date: "Septr 1804."
Published (with
a different epigraph and without date) in Palmyra, pp. 59-66.
Collated with Works, 6:41-46. The first two lines of each
stanza
in the printed text are combined into one in the MS.
4 While] WhilstNot capitalized: "heav'n" (23), "disobedient daughter" (54). Not hyphenated: "tomorrow" (72). Elided: "wint'ry" (12).
13-18 Hope's visions wild . . . prospect blighting.] In hapless hour love's fatal pow'r | My too fond bosom cherish'd: | Oh! happier far, if, ere my heart | First felt the sharp envenom'd dart, | This wretched form had perish'd!
25 fondest] firmest
27 soul] heart
28 in those] in youth's
34 my days] each hour
Notes
Although Palmyra, and Other Poems was dated 1806, it must have been published in November or December 1805, for the frontispiece is dated November 1805 and the volume was reviewed in the Literary Journal for December 1805 (5:1326-27).
Letter to Thomas L'Estrange, 3 July 1860, in The Works of Thomas Love Peacock, ed. H. F. B. Brett-Smith and C. E. Jones, 10 vols. (1924-34), 8:250—hereafter cited as Works. For Peacock's disappointment over the sale of Palmyra, see his letter to Edward Hookham, 18 August 1810, in Works, 8:188.
MS letter in the possession of John Storms, quoted in my "Peacock before Headlong Hall: A New Look at His Early Years," Keats-Shelley Memorial Bulletin, 36 (1985): 24.
For a detailed description of the Sadleir-Taylor MS, see Works, 7:460-462. Most of the transcripts are in an unidentified feminine hand, but five poems on pages 39-47 are copied in another hand that the Halliford editors take to be Peacock's. I find this ascription doubtful, partly on account of the appearance of the handwriting and partly on account of the uncharacteristic carelessness of the transcription. See, for example, the evidence of the copyist's insensitivity to the dialect of the comic Irishman in "Paddy's Lamentation," as revealed below in the collation of that poem with the text in the Berg MS.
The Berg MS texts of four poems have been collated in Shelley and His Circle, ed. Kenneth Neill Cameron and Donald H. Reiman, 8 vols. to date (1961- ), 1:251-253, 277-284, 332-334, 374-377. The titles and dates of all twenty-eight poems have been listed in a note to my "Peacock before Headlong Hall," pp. 15-16. Otherwise this interesting manuscript has been wholly ignored by Peacock scholars. It is here quoted by permission of the authorities of the Henry W. and Albert A. Berg Collection, New York Public Library, Astor, Lenox, and Tilden Foundations.
British Library Add. MS 36816, fols. 103-127. See the facsimile of a sample page in Works, 7: facing p. 317.
Alumni Cantabrigienses, compiled by John Venn and J. A. Venn, 10 vols. (1922-54), Part II, 4:82.
For details of the Lucretia Oldham poems, see H. F. B. Brett-Smith's Biographical Introduction to Works, 1:xxviii-xxx, and my "Peacock before Headlong Hall," pp. 14-15.
The only two known copies of The Monks of St. Mark are both in the New York Public Library: one in the Berg Collection and the other in the Pforzheimer Collection. The argument that the poem was printed at the same time as Palmyra is here developed more fully than was possible in my "Peacock before Headlong Hall," p. 16.
A full record of the punctuation variants in the Berg MS would practically double the length of the collation, without making much difference in the way we read the poems. Even Peacock's exclamation points are used so liberally as to greatly weaken their force of emphasis. In general, the punctuation of the Berg MS is not only heavier but much more logical and consistent than that of the Sadleir-Taylor MS, many of whose worst defects have been supplied by the Halliford editors. Peacock's only unusual practice in the Berg MS is his frequent use of ellipsis points in place of, or in addition to, some other punctuation mark.
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