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Emendations to be Made in the First-Edition Copy-Text

The following symbols are used: B (Bruccoli—that is, an emendation to be made for the first time), C (Cowley—"The Author's Final Version," 1951), F (Fitzgerald—a revision marked by the author in his copy of the novel), S (Serial—Scribner's Magazine, 1934), I (first edition, 1934), II (The Scribner Library edition, 1960).

                                                                   
3.1  the shore ] F; the pleasant shore S, I-II 
3.2  stood ] F; stands S, I-II 
3.4  cooled ] F; cool S, I-II 
3.4  stretched ] F; stretches S, I-II 
3.5  Now ] F; Lately S, I-II 
3.6  in 1925 ] F; a decade ago S, I-II 
3.7-8  April; in those days only ] F; April. Now, many bungalows cluster near it, but when this story begins only S, I-II; April. Only C 
3.17  had come ] F; came S, I-II 
3.21  had floundered ] C; floundered S, I-II 
4.8  this ] F; one S, I-II 
4.10;19.6  hotel ] C; Hotel S, I-II 
18.25;220.2  hotel ] S; Hotel I-II 
12.6  Antheil ] C; Anthiel S, I-II 
12.8;13.5  Ulysses ] S; Ulysses I-II 
16.11;30.11   Daddy's Girl. ] C; 'Daddy's Girl.' S, I-II 
17.11  the ] C; The S, I-II 
18.11  "Nice Carnival Song" ] B; ˄ ˜ ˄ S, I-II, C 
18.12  Le Temps ] S; Le Temps I-II 
18.13  The Saturday Evening Post ] S; The Saturday Evening Post I-II; the Saturday Evening Post
18.30  czar ] C; Czar S, I-II 
19.1  Buddhas' ] C; Buddha's S, I-II 
19.5  Eleven years ago ] B; Ten years ago S, I-II; Eleven years before C 
20.19  was ] C; were S, I-II 
21.26  swimming. ] C; ˜ , S, I-II 
22.18  the Paris Herald ] B; The New York Herald I; The New York Herald S, II; the Paris edition of the New York Herald
*24.19-23  His eyes . . . . more ] stet S, I-II, C 
24.23  uninterested ] C; disinterested S, I-II 
*24.30  Señor ] C; Signor S, I-II 
28.1  as nearly sulky ] S; nearly as sulkily I-II; feeling nearly as sulky C 
42.8  Divers' ] S; Diver's I-II 
42.25  irrelevant ] C; irrelative S, I-II 
48.20  Iles de Lérins ] C; Isles des Lerins S, I-II 
60.4  party ] C; parties S, I-II 
*61.10  words ] stet S, I-II 

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68.16  chair. . . . ] B; ˜. . . S, I-II, C 
70.6  Daddy's Girl ] C; "Daddy's Girl" S, I-II 
71.12  because ] C; due to the fact that S, I-II 
74.5  Beaumont-Hamel ] C; ˜ ˄ ˜ S, I-II 
75.15  mairie ] S; mairie I-II, C 
75.21  Undine ] S; Undine I-II 
75.22  marraines ] S; marraines I-II, C 
75.23  Württemberg ] C; Wurtemburg S, I-II 
76.26  seven ] C; six S, I-II 
78.6  Württembergers ] C; Wurtemburgers S, I-II 
78.8  Old ] C; old S, I-II 
79.2  Arts ] C; Art S, I-II 
79.4  Hôtel ] C; Hotel S, I-II 
97.5  hotel ] C; Hotel S; Hôtel I-II 
101.9  odyssey ] C; Odyssey S, I-II 
102.5  Hengist ] C; Hengest S, I-II 
104.28;  136.15 Champs-Élysées ] C; ˜ ˄ ˜ S, I-II 
105.1  Saint-Lazare ] C; ˜ ˄ ˜ I-II; St. Lazare S 
106.9  on a world ] C; on world S, I-II 
111.19  Diaghilev ] C; Diaghileff S, I-II 
111.21  décor ] C; decor S, I-II 
117.5  friend ] S; friends I-II 
*119.10,12  100,000 Chemises ] C; 1000 chemises S, I-II 
*119.30  Canossa ] B; Ferrara S, I-II, C 
*120.1-122.6  hour it had become ] F; hour of standing. . . . It had become S, I-II 
120.14  de Saint-Ange ] B; des Saintes ˄ Anges S; des Saintes-Anges I-II 
121.11  through? ] S; ˜. I-II, C 
122.31  Brizard ] C; Brizzard S, I-II 
122.31  Fernet-Branca ] B; André Fernet ˄ Blanco S, I-II; Fernet ˄ Branca C 
122.32  Rocher ] C; Rochet S, I-II 
125.4  had been awakened ] C; had awakened S, I 
*128.17  Montmartre ] stet S, I-II, C 
*128.18  Copenhagen ] stet S, I-II, C 
128.22  Why you ] stet S, I-II 
128.23  Évreux ] C; Evreux S, I-II 
129.26  conservatism ] S; conversation I-II, C 
131.4   Mosby ] C; Moseby S, I-II 
132.10  concessionnaire ] C; concessionaire I-II 
132.23  Liberty ] C; Liberty S, I-II 
133.4,8  France ] C; France S, I-II 
133.15  about ] C; of S, I-II 
136.2  arrondissement ] C; arrondisement S, I-II 
136.16  failing ] stet S, I-II, C 
137.21  godlike ] C; Godlike S, I-II 
139.9  states ] C; States S, I-II 
139.29  Latin Quarter ] C; French Latin quarter S, I-II 
142.13  Third ] C; third S, I-II 
145.32  unexceptionably ] B; unexceptionally S, I-II, C 
152.18  Damenstiftgasse ] C; Damenstiff Strasse S, I-II 
153.18  at] F; in S, I-II 
153.27  criterion ] C; criteria S, I-II 
153.31  The Rose and the Ring ] S; The Rose and the Ring I-II 
154.17  yourself. Once ] F; yourself—once S, I-II 
154.24  subject. No good sense." ] F; subject." S, I-II 
154.28  people—they were the illusions ] F; people; illusions S, I-II 
155.7-9  destiny. Best ] F; destiny. . . Best S, I-II 
156.16  cortex ] C; cervical S, I-II 
157.2;  158.33 Zürichsee ] B; Zurichsee S, I-II 
157.7  Kraepelin ] F; Krapaelin S, I-II 
*157.13-15   You . . . Dick." ] stet I-II 
*157.16  war—you ] stet S, I-II 
158.5  privates ] F; private soldiers S, I-II 
158.10  "Toward ] F; "—toward S, I-II 
159.6  plateau ] F; eminence S, I-II 
159.12  Outside, some ] F; Some S, I-II 
159.13  one ] F; they S, I-II 
159.20  room. Pushing ] F; room; pushing S, I-II 
159.24  first ] F; first one S, I-II 
160.1  about the ] F; about the time of the S, I-II 
*162.21  farcical ] B; farcicle S, I-II, C 
164.3, 4, 5, 8, 13  . . . . ] C; . . . S, I-II 
*167.7  thirteen ] B; eleven S, I-II; twelve C 
175.9;  311.26 clinic ] C; Clinic S, I-II 
175.9  Interlaken ] C; Interlachen S; Interlacken I-II 
177.4  gladiolus ] C; gladiola S, I-II 
178.10  Suppé's ] C; Suppe's S, I-II 
178.19-20   path, where, in a moment,  

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a shadow cut across it—she ] C; path; where, in a moment, a shadow cut across it—she F; path —where in a moment a shadow cut across it. She S, I-II 
180.10  "A ] C; ˄ ˜ S, I-II 
180.12  down. . . . ] B; down . . . S, I-II; down—" C 
180.22  shoulder—then apart. ] F; shoulder. S, I-II 
180.23  record.—Have ] C; record," she said. "—Have S, I-II; record,— Have F 
181.4  table, male eyes ] F; table, eyes S, I-II 
181.26  service ] B; Service S, I-II; army C 
183.11  Glas Bier ] C; Glas-bier S; Glas-Bier I-II 
187.17  Burberry ] B; burberry S, I-II, C 
192.12  who ] S; whom I-II 
193.9, 31   Kraepelin ] C; Krapaelin S, I-II 
193.15  Extra space after l.15] F; no extra space S, I-II 
*193.17  Dent du Midi ] C; Jugenhorn S, I-II 
193.22  trainbands ] C; trained bands S; trained-bands I-II 
193.31  sie ] C; siz I-II 
194.7  down into port ] C; down port S, I-II 
195.3  Kursaal ] C; Kursal I-II 
*197.19  four ] C; five S, I-II 
199.23  Vanity Fair. ] C; 'Vanity Fair.' S, I-II 
199.24  schizoid ] S; schizzoid I 
200.1  Guards ] C; guards' S, I-II 
205.12  Rocher ] C; Rochers S, I-II 
209.23  camérière ] B; camerière I-II; cameriere C 
209.30  Grotto ] C; Grotte S, I-II 
211.28  Affaires Étrangères ] C; Affaires Etrangères S, I-II 
*212.9  Tommy ] stet S, I-II 
*212.23-4   beach with my husband and two children. ] stet S, I-II 
215.10  "Nice Carnival Song" ] C; ˄ ˜ ˄ S, I-II 
217.23  McBeth ] C; MacBeth S, I-II 
219.30  into ] C; in S, I-II 
221.11  menagerie ] C; Menagerie S, I-II 
223.28  hotel ] C; Hôtel I; Hotel S, II 
223.29;  353.11 casino ] C; Casino S, I-II 
*226.5  just over ] C; almost S, I-II 
226.8  spinster's ] C; spinsters' S, I-II 
*227.23  Gregorovious ] B; Gregorovius S, I-II, C 
*230.11  have ] C; haven't S, I-II 
230.20  Privatdocent ] B; Privat docent S, I; Privat-dozent II, C 
233.3  Humpty Dumpty ] C; Humpty-Dumpty S, I-II 
236.5  Prokofiev's Love for Three Oranges. ] C; Prokofieff's Love of Three Oranges. S; Prokofieff's "Love of Three Oranges." I-II 
236.8  his bed-lamp and ] C; the light and S; his bed-lamp light and I-II 
*238.1  seven ] C; eight S, I-II 
*238.15  ergo ] stet S, I-II 
*239.30  uninstructed ] B; instructed S, I-II, C 
240.25  as if imprisoned in ] C; as imprisoned in S, I; as imprisoned as in II 
243.14  with nail scissors ] C; with scissors S; with a nail scissors I-II 
*246.22  nine ] C; six S, I-II 
249.20  opposite ] C; apposite S, I-II 
250.21  schizophrenic ] C; "schizophrêne" S, I-II 
252.10  Émile's ] C; Emile's S, I-II 
252.10  Émile ] C; Emile S, I-II 
254.7  patients' ] S; patient's I-II 
255.10  The Century ] B; The Century I-II, the Century
255.10  the Motion Picture ] C; The Motion Picture I-II 
255.10  L'Illustration ] S; L'Illustration I-II 
255.11  and the Fliegende Blätter ] S; and the Fliegende Blätter I-II; and Fliegende Blätter
256.13  a ] C; A S, I-II 
257.7  or ] C; nor S, I-II 
257.7  men's ] C; their S, I-II 
257.32  inordinately, meanwhile ] B; inordinately and S; inordinately ˄ meanwhile I-II; inordinately C 
258.2  grand tour ] B; Grand Tour S, C; grand Tour I-II 
*259.11  stood ready to depart] S; departed I-II; lingered C 

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259.31  the Herald ] C; The Herald S; The Herald I-II 
262.7  Erbsensuppe ] B; erbsen-suppe S, I-II; Erbsen-suppe C 
262.7  Würstchen ] C; würstchen S, I-II 
262.8  steins ] B; helles S, I-II; seidels C 
262.9  Kaiserschmarren. ] B; kaiserschmarren. S; "kaiser-schmarren." I-II Kaiser-schmarren. C 
266.16  the income ] C; it S, I-II 
268.17  the steamer's ] C; its S, I-II 
270.11  hoofs ] C; hoops I-II 
270.17  The Grandeur that was Rome ] C; 'The Grandeur that was Rome' S, I-II 
271.1  Corriere della Sera ] C; Corriere della Sera I-II 
271.1  Sainclair ] stet S, I-II, C 
271.1  Wall Street ] C; 'Wall Street' I-II 
271.3  città ] C; citta I-II 
*271.14  three ] B; four S, I-II, C 
*271.16  twenty-one . . . thirty-seven ] B; twenty-two . . . thirty-eight S, I-II, C 
274.2  Daddy's Girl ] C; Daddy's Girl I-II 
274.17  now. . . . ] C; now . . . S, I-II 
274.21  heaven. . . . ] B; heaven . . . I-II; heaven. C 
276.12  twenty-one ] B; twenty-two S, I-II, C 
288.16  Nazionale ] C; Nationale S, I-II 
290.5  mousseux ] S; mousseaux I-II 
*291.12  Birmingham ] stet S, I-II 
294.16,23  saoul ] C; sault S; saoûl I-II 
296.7  Guards ] B; guards' S, I-II, C 
301.10  on which ] C; whereon S, I-II 
*301.18  sempre diretto ] C; semper dritte S, I-II 
301.18  sinistra ] C; sinestra S, I-II 
301.18  destra ] C; dextra S, I-II 
301.22  Piazza di Spagna ] C; Piazzo d' Espagna S, I-II 
306.18  palpable ] stet S, I-II 
309.28  telegram ] C; cable S, I-II 
313.6  with ] C; to S, I-II 
314.3  Wassermanns ] B; Wassermans S, I-II, C 
314.15  Chilean ] C; Chilian S, I-II 
316.7,  25; 319.22 Chile ] C; Chili S, I-II 
*317.3  the late thirties ] B; the forties S, I-II; one's late thirties C 
*320.17  Devereux ] I1951; Charles S, I1934  
320.20  in which ] B; wherein S, I-II; where C 
320.27  grata ] S; gratis I-II 
323.6  the Paris Herald ] B; The New York Herald S, I-II; the New York Herald
325.5  "The Wedding of the Painted Doll." ] S; The Wedding of the Painted Doll. I-II 
327.18  cess ] C; 'cess S, I-II 
*331.2-3  been rented again, so ] B; long been rented for the summer, so S; been rented again for the summer, so I-II, C 
331.6  are ] C; is S, I-II 
*331.11  eight and six ] B; eleven and nine S, I-II; seven and nine C 
332.4  regimen ] C; regimentation S, I-II 
*332.13  six ] B; nine S, I-II; seven C 
332.24  Owing ] C; Due S, I-II 
*332.29-341.11  stet S, I-II, C 
334.1  Kabyle . . . Sabæan ] C; Kyble . . . Sabian S; Kyble . . . Sabaean I-II 
336.27  itself ] S; herself I-II 
*337.11  La ] B; El S, I-II, C 
342.13  Mouton ] C; Moutonne S, I-II 
344.7  Salaud ] I1951; Salaut S; Saland I1934  
345.8  him, about . . . guess in ] C; him, about . . . guess at in I-II; him . . . guess at in S 
345.23  bay ] C; Bay S, I-II 
345.23;  346.6; 349.16; 353.30 Margin ] S; Margin I-II 
347.23  nous autres héros," he said, "il faut ] B; nous héros," he said, "il nous faut S, I-II; nous autres héros il faut C 
347.24  héroïsme ] S; héroisme I-II, C 
*348.6  Légion Étrangère ] B; Corps d'Afrique du Nord S, I-II; Bataillon d'Afrique C 
349.23  Lady Caroline ] C; Lady Sibly-Biers S, I-II 
350.24  enfantillage ] C; enfance S; enfanterie I-II 
351.14  saying, "What ] B; saying: ¶"What S, I-II; saying ˄ "What C 
353.11  casino ] B; Casino S, I-II, C 

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*352.3  lesion ] stet S, I-II 
353.16  them ] C; it S, I-II 
354.2  waiting ] B; attendant S, I-II; Divers' C 
354.13  à ] C; a S, I-II 
357.17  Niçois ] C; Niçoise S, I-II 
361.20  expressed ] C; personified S, I-II 
363.30  hook ] S; nook I 
*364.5  four ] B; five S, I-II, C 
*364.8  summers ] B; years S, I-II, C 
*364.14  four ] B; five S, I-II, C 
367.1  Baby Gar ] stet S, I-II 
368.33  Abrams's ] S; Abram's I-II 
369.31  Loos ] S; Loos' I-II 
369.31  Faits Accomplis ] S; Faits Accomplis I-II, C 
380.18  from what ] C; than I-II 
382.6  Kornilov ] C; Korniloff S, I-II 
384.15  to find ] C; finding S, I-II 
*391.28  Sibly ] S; Sibley I-II, C 
399.16  the Herald . . . the Times ] C; The Herald . . . The Times S; The Herald . . . The Times I-II 
399.20  ouste ] C; Ouste S, I-II 
*399.24-5 purse. It ] C; purse—and Dick recognized it as he saw it. It S, I-II 
*399.29-33   en," Dick called after him, "When . . . here?" ] C; en," Dick identified him as the man who had once hailed him in the . . . five years before. ¶"When . . . here?" he called after him. S, I-II 
399.31  Rue de Saint-Ange ] B; Rue de St. Anges; Due de Saints Anges I; Rue de Saints Anges II 
400.31  victims ] C; dupes S, I-II 
401.11  principle ] S; principal I-II 
*401.21  "I . . . Dick. ] stet I-II 
403.5  beach ] C; Beach S, I-II 
403.10  The AP ] B; the A. and P. S, I-II; the AP C 
407.9  New York ] C; N. Y. S, I-II 
408.7  section ] C; Section S, I-II